Arhi SS Chamkili. Link to thread#2 and AN on Pg-135. 01-7-14.

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poojdc87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Hey I really love this story so far! You've captured Khushi's internal voice perfectly - well her subconscious I guess? That whole Salman Khan thing was so funny! Sad, but funny! Please keep writing!!

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sargamfriends

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

first of all a big fat WOW to ur writing...wht a marvelous job u have dne...i mean the excellence with which u have portrayed her feelings and thoughts...her pain and her insecurities...her ability to fake her happiness...Arnav's actions...forgetting abt her and thn remembering...giving her pain and thn soothing it and thn giving pain again...their relationship...true it hasnt lost love...but smethng is missing lol...loved it!!!!

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: McNinja
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Haha Srija, when I was watching today's episode and saw the part where she was left alone after the match and went home, I was like why does this feel like dejavu. Then i remembered it was because I read it here first 😆

I agree with you with that the love isn't lost between the two. Especially from Arnav because as insensitive he's being, he really thinks they put the matter to rest. Once he finds out exactly what khushi is feeling, he's going to leave no stone unturned to fix. Doesn't mean I forgive him for being a thick headed fool right now.

Thank you for some of Arnav's thoughts! And I think you're on par with how the writers are thinking, again. Arnav's thoughts are still centered around khushi even if he gets caught up in other things sometimes.

You're doing a good job of portraying khushis feelings I think. This is what the cvs tried to do but failed at an epic level. They wanted us to see this hurt, insecure, jealous khushi not some clown. And i think you were spot on with her insecurities and jealousy..where a small gesture ofncare makes her feel better but then the very next minute shes back to feeling bad. This is how any normal person would react! Sorry for the wordy response but i can't help it, lol. Looking forward to seeing this SS unfold along with the actual track!

I'm kind of sad it wasn't bankelal Ji but lavanya will do as well. Maybe she'll play Cupid again?

Wow it feels so good when someone understands exactly what you are trying to say, no amount of 'awesome work!' can match that😳

As you pointed out, Arnav's love or interest in Khushi is still very much there, as one could see in todays episode, that "Watch out" or the teasing nose touching with "Goal football mein hota hai, basket ball me nai" and then thinking of Khushi the moment Nani mentioned the similarities once again did show us that he still cares and expression has always been a problem with him, though he has improved a lot but he still is an amateur in the field😆 And finally the CVs have started taking Khushi's fears seriously, now we can laugh at her wild crazy dreams or try and see that deep seated fear she is juggling through. I mean for heaven's sake she dreamt of Arnav throwing her out ove Jalebis and for salad, how can the CV's make it more obvious now and then everyone has their own way of purgation or letting things out and crazy dreams is Khushi's way.

BTW, coming to the story as u pointed out Arnav is all the time thinking about Khushi, feeling angry, romantic, guilty, whatever, but all his feelings and thoughts are centred around Khushi though with so much happening around his attention is bound to divert, and so he unintentionally hurts Khushi all the time, probably becoming aware of it instantly as well. But the problem is, he is not aware of the degree of insecurity that Khushi is going through. Once he realizes that, half the problem is solved and from his side he has anyway made things very clear, saying nothing happend between him and Sheetal ever. But then Khushi is also justified, but I think her insecurities have more to do with her husband and herself then Aarav or Sheetal, though they might have served as triggers to surface these insecurities.

And finally wasn't the similarity just too much😆 I was like people will now blame me of stealing frm the Creatives through some telepathetic connection😆

Thanks a lot for ur comment dear, u have no idea how much I love the wordy ones😊

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

I'm really hoping that la turns the tables for khushi. Keeping fingers crossed. I can't see khushi's pain

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shanon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Omg, poor kushi,but once arnav come to his sense he will not leave a single stone to unturned. He will not leave his kushi for a sec.

Hope lavanya will make arnav to understand. She will be a cupid for them.

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babli0204

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Beautiful SS. My heart went with Khushi!!!!!!!!!!!!! Arnav must stop taking Khushi for granted!!!!
Please update soon!!!!

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Amazing update.

Thanks for the PM.

Please update the next part soon :)

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Jessie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

very nice insight into Khushi. pls continue.

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Does Arnav Use Her Just To Please Himself ;| He Forgot Her At The Last Bit :( Poor Khushi 🥺

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: -Tintin.
Does Arnav Use Her Just To Please Himself ;| He Forgot Her At The Last Bit :( Poor Khushi 🥺

Now if he would have only been using khushi his thoughts wouldn't have been centred around Khushi. And when he feels that for some or the other reason he is not being able to attend to Khushi, he feels guilty. So I wouldn't really blame him completely atleast in this SS. The complication is more of a situational construct.