Arhi SS Chamkili. Link to thread#2 and AN on Pg-135. 01-7-14.

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sivpriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

luvd it!!

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laddoo598

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

That was a very nice start. Please continue soon :)

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hellomotto369

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Great start!! do continue!! I hope the new entry is a guy, so arnav can be jealous and understand what khushi is going through!!

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: 1rocks
WOW!!!!!!! 👏
YOU SHOULD DEFINITELY CONTINUE.😊
.I loved it..😃
.you have beautifully portrayed her emotions...

Thanks a lot dear😊

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: memories_im
loved it..i so wish something like this happens in the show instead of the useless comedy.. they should focus on how bad khushi is feeling
Please pm me the next parts :)

Me too friend, I am also longing to see some real raw pain but seems like its too much to hope for after all the OTT we r being served lately. So this was just an attempt to calm my own nerves😆

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Wow! Amazing one! Please continue and update soon Pleaseee

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: babli0204
You have so beautifully caught Khushi's inner turmoil!!!!

It was as if everything is happening in front of my eyes.

Wonderful beginning. Please continue!

Thanks a lot for your generous compliment. 😊

I cannot express what a non-writer like me feels when someone says something so nice as ur comment😳

Thanku😳

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

OH God, My Heart Breaks For Khushi :( 🥺

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McNinja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Helllo, I'm glad you're back with some more writing! Looking forward to reading this SS esp with the show going to the gutters.

I'm not sure which direction you're taking it but can we expect some Arnav monologues? This has been lacking big time in the show and I want to know what the hell is going through his head!

I'm loving how this actually show just how bady insecure khushi is feeling through this...the once strong khushi is so broken down that she's doubting every meeting Arnav. That's what we should be seeing in the show. I think you should defs keep showing these emotions but don't make her pity herself...would love to see a broken down khushi try t hold it together who finally snaps but comes out stronger.

New entry...is it someone related to her? Or Dhurv like spoilers are sayin(and also who I'm waiting for) bankelal Ji?!?! Loll!

Do continue please!