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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Beautiful, so beautiful...

The poem was emotional. Lovely. Brought their memories to light, their love shone through.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

Lovely update - you could feel both their excitement as the meeting grew closer! Wonderful!

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sias2

@sias2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

you made me cry today..i am speechless To comment..
its indeed wonderful!!
thanks for such a lovely update!

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

beautiful poem😃the way khushi went from hope to do pooja..then to hospital..their reactions seeing each other..beautifully written dear👏update the next soon dear😃

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Beautiful Kalyaani.

I tried to visualise khushi in the sari and her jhumkas and the sindoor on her face.

Thank you so much for writing this.

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

I don't live in India and neither understand the Durga pooja celebration but I understood what you've written despite my lack of knowledge on the celebration. It was beautiful.
The emotions were heartfelt. The uniting of two separated lovers was well written. Loved this update... Totally!

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roseycheek

@roseycheek

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Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Wat a wonderful story abt precious bond between two ppl..loved reading every line of it!!!!!

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

what a beautiful update! I hope this isn't the last part?

I kept reading and kept twitching thinking something is going to go wrong, they both can't be so calm and happy and everything can't be happening. I kept waiting for someone to get hurt or something bad but THANK YOU for just bringing them together in the most beautiful way.

The description of her getting ready, the collected way they met, the poem and the words that were not said- beautiful!!!

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#419

The poem was absolutely superb how do u manage to write such awesome breathtaking stories are u a professional

Can I borrow the poem I want to write this on a card and gift it to my hubby :-) if only u don't mind :-)

Hey I have a story in mind will u write it for me please u can have the credis but I want to put this story on if just coz I love ipk so very much

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#420

That was beautiful, I simply adore your writing, bringing them together like that, the way the forgive each other defines a special kind of love, would love to read more.