SS: It was always you...Completed - Note on Pg70

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K it's one of the most intriguing stories I've ever read on this forum.

Right at the start where Khushi wonders why a particular patient visits her in spite of being healthy got me hooked.

Why have you made Manorama a Mallik instead of a Raizada?

What went wrong between Manorama's family and her brother-in-laws kids (Arnav and Anjali???)?

If Khushi and Manorama are talking about Arnav then your Arnav is an architect... hmm... What could be about Anjali that would make Khushi and Arnav separate?

Khushi said she changed her name to feel more married but she calls herself Dr. Gupta. Why?

Why is Manorama so adamant that Khushi is the right girl for Arnav? She's so sure about it that she's ready to propose on his behalf? Well she thinks of him as a son but does he think of her as a mother?

You were planning to write drama and ended up penning a thriller. So many questions. Need i say update soon?

nice concept..

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Interesting on a new setting... Doctor architect...

This is a terrific start to a story that I am really looking forward to reading. It is clear the both the women are talking about the same man, at least I hope so! I love the fact that she is a doctor and an independent, strong woman. Both have interesting and different professions, that makes for a dymanic that should be interesting as the story unfold!😊

Loved it and thanks for the PM.
I bet Arnav is the nephew and he and Khuhsi were the couple!
Can't wait to see of I was right!!

The concept is very refreshing and this first part is simply amazing

That looks interesting...
Khushi...poor soul...
Continue soon:)

i grt lv stry bth were talkng abt arnav o
mg update soon dear thnx 4 pm

Loved the concept. It's very interesting. Continue and pm me.