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rulama

@rulama

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#391

Awww!

That was beautiful and had my eyes glued!😊

The words on photograph was touching!❤️

And their reunion was really the Union of Souls.☯️

No words! Just communication with silence!!

Lovely update. You had me bowled.

Take a bow Lady!! ⭐️

🤗

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#392

I had to read the last part again to absorb it completely cuz my eyes were blur due to the tears welled up in them.

It was fantastic. Loved the way you described Arnav's POV about the women in his life.

And the meeting was perfect n the talking through eyes. I was in tears while reading it. And the hug aww AMAZING!!

Eagerly Waiting for the next part.
Please update soon.

Love,
'J'

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

Nice update K... finally they are together... and just loved the poem Arnav had got written for Khushi...

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#394

Woman what is it with you and romance/love.Beautifully written, heart warmingly beautiful.

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

a beautiful update...

so amazingly written...no words required...no explanations needed...only the love they share was appropriate and more than enough to convey what they felt and will feel for each other...

loved every single thing about this update...but special reference to the words that were written on photo frame...

awesome...thanks for update :)

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aeyshaalim

@aeyshaalim

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#396

Loved the update
The poem was so beautiful

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prettypri

@prettypri

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#397

Lovely update as usual😊 The excitement and eagerness both felt along with their apprehension could almost be felt-the words described the feelings so aptly!

Cant wait to read their first conversation after two years!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#398

That was real beautiful loved how they met and the words were real beautiful

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#399

An amazingly beautiful update... The depth of their love made me cry... The way Khushi dressed up just on intuition was so so sweet, the happiness she found in her heart, the urge she felt to be near him through his gifts was so endearing and when they finally met it was plain awesome.

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vgedin

@vgedin

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#400

Oh Kalyaani, this felt like a fairy tale getting its happy ending. The Prince and the Princess reunite on the festival day!

And there were so many things so incredibly warm and romantic, I'll have to rethink the badass-Kalyaani image in my head. The picture and the poem (the poem was lovely!), the saree and the kurta - oh and his wish to rub that stubble against her cheek. I would have liked to see him do that. But never mind, the ending was perfect. (I'm assuming this is the last part?)

Loved it! And I cannot believe you managed to write this after such a hectic week! Go take some rest :)