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Suchi

@ChitraF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#401

wow.. what to say.. beautiful update..

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latekate

@latekate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#402

Kalyaani, That was a beautiful ending. (like vgedin I too am assuming that this is the last part - happily ever after)

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LittlePrincess8

@LittlePrincess8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#403

kalyaani u have made me speechless...i can feel their divine love through your writing...i really dont have any words to praise you..believe me...

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simran

@Laters_Baby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#404

well explaind just lvd it amazng update thnx 4 pm

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toblerone

@toblerone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#405

that was amaazing 👍🏼

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Very nice update. But is there one more coming for 'It was always you'?

Till the time Khushi entered her consultation room., My heart was dhak dhak.. Like if she see him will she run away or ..
But thanx to Payal :)

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

The p0em and the last line was en0ugh t0 mist my eyes Kalyaani.
They prepared themselves f0r each 0ther and after everything, accept each 0ther with0ut any questi0n. Beautiful and heart warming

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#408

Ahhh...finally they meet. K, you have a way with words..while writing romance. It thrills and mesmerizes the reader. His bubbling anticipation and longing, her liveliness and the know it all feeling that he must be around for her to be this lively and their eye lock and the hug..it landed me to some other world...kudos to you..for a beautifully written and heart-warming update.

I loved how kushi unknowingly chose the saree gifted by arnav and adorned her ears with his mother's earrings, and how anjali re-gifted him the kurta-pyjama gifted by kushi, old-woman smearing vermilion on kushi ..like these were signs from above..

And when they met, only a look and a hug was necessary to wash away the 2 years' anguish of wait and joy of reunion.

Edit: I forgot to add..the poem was beautiful. it has a soul of its own!!

Edited by Onlooker - 12 years ago

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#409

has it ended!!

this was beautiful

please dont end it!!!

oh god the emotions i felt rundown me the moment they met were indescribable

wow is the word!!!!

really really beautiful!

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fanatic_nisha

@fanatic_nisha

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#410

A beautiful quote to begin the update with, the poem perfectly describing their unwavering, unconditional, ever-lasting love for each other.
I simply just loved the update.