SS: It was always you...Completed - Note on Pg70 - Page 39

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the next update eagerly..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
FINALLY !!!!
I knew staying up till 3am will have its benefits 😉
Off to read the chapter...


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Loved, absolutely loved the poem...very true and fitting...made me teary *sniff*

the way they both wore each other's gift was so befitting the long overdue meeting...i could actually imagine the glow on her face when that lady applied sindoor on her...so beautifully written...

Loved how arnav appreciated all the four women on such an auspicious day...

Loved the meeting...how they found peace in each other's arms...no words needed...just the presence of the other was enough :)

Amazing update
Loved it

Edited by Shweta1691 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just finished reading all the updates back to back from phone and unresing from phone too.

Firstly thanks for giving me a happily ever after. You know how much I'm crying for one :)

Now to the story. It was an emotionally taxing story.

Only Khushi could do something as selfless as leave Arnav so that his relationship with Anjali isn't affected. So that Anjali's children are not left without a father.

Dr. Payal Sharma took me by surprise. She talked so much sense. Am sure she feels for Khusi like a sister and that's why was apprehensive when she moved with him. That's why she always disliked Arnav wondering if he was worth Khushi or not. And she was able to present Arnav's case to Khushi quite sensibly.

Anjali and her blind devotion to Shyam had to be the root cause, nahi? But der aaye durust aaye. She knew where she was wrong and where Arnav made mistakes with respect to Khushi. She was honest enough to admit her own and frank enough to make Arnav realise his.

All in all a great SS K. And did i mention that i loved the poem?? I can not only call it apt for this story but can safely say it fits the IPK as i see it in my head too :)

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the beautiful scenes you created..the built up to the meeting, the anticipation, the durga pooja, the beautiful saree, the kurta, the pandal, even the hospital..every word ..every scene was brilliant..
and the poem...sigh..the photo...brilliant...
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Posted: 12 years ago
u portrayed the feeling of the duo very well. I liked the reunion.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh that was so beautiful
finally they meet and the words which arnav said yes and forever
and the poem was amazing
great work
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love how you capture diverse emotions Kalyaani... and this update was a prime example of it. So many people praying for them to be together again... It had to happen right. And with the blessings of Devi Mayiaa on Vijay Dashami... adored the way you weaved in these little points..making their reunion even more meaningful.
And that verse... Did you write that? It was incredibly Good... 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
The meeting was just beautiful...it is indeed a wonderful experiment... Finding solace in loved ones arm...what s more precious than this...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful story and a lovely ending =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWEEE BEAUTIFULL..!
yar great..loved it to core ..you wrote it beautifully :)

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