*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: A Jalebi-fied Tale

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deep5128

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Superb ss! Luv it
Thnx 4 pm

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panck

@panck

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Thanks for the PM
Love the way you write, the stories are fun with moments of intensity, extremely well written with fantastic characterization.
I already feel sorry for Arnav, this Khushi is going drive him crazy.
Really liked the fact that she did not allow him to eat the sugar laden dessert.
Will wait to read more

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Peehu24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

some things never change..anjali and her match making skills

awesome update..and interesting one too..

ek ladki aur do ladke...ah! its going to be fun...😆

loved it...

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Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

wowww...an amazing update...U know what I am surely going to b a diabetic reading ur updates...By the way where is Late honey...Y dint u update it.. U started off with a new one instead of finishing the older one...No probs as its always a treat to read ur updates...Now i can have two wonderful updates from U...

keep the great work going on at a sound speed dear,,,,,

thnx for the PM

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

well, I must say you are quite a prolific writer, with your mind seemingly teeming with a lot of ideas... loved the way this began... the sense of liveliness prevailing in the house, dhruv's intro and being mesmerised by khushi and the usual arnav-khushi bickering... for a minute there, I wondered if there was a mistake and you'd written dhruv, instead of arnav! thsnk god things were clarified... so is dhruv the long-lost brother or another cousin like nk... he already reminds me of nk! pangs of jealousy already seem to be nipping at arnav's heels... liked seeing khushi careful of arnav's health! so who didn't return arnav's call?

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

congrats...

part 1
fantastic start...
so Arnav and Khushi have always been at loggerheads...
and Dhruv is smitten by Khushi...
how is Dhruv related to the Raizadas?
cont soon dear...

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Piyali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Nice concept yaar...btw was arnav jealous due to dhruv khushi friendship?? I hope yes...it'll be fun to watch j asr...hehe...btw thnks 4d pm...it ws gr8...update supa soon...

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applesauce.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

*Rubs hands in Glee*😃
This is so Exciting.cnt Wait for next part already.

I so enjoyed reading the first Part.Couldnt wipe out the grin throughout.I love the Nok-Jhok betn Arhi.And nw we have Dhruv as tadka to it!

I loved the concern Khushi had for Arnav when he was abt to have the sugar Sheera..I was like aww!<3

The jealously flaming in Arnav..Was so enjoying😆!