*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: A Jalebi-fied Tale - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
yaaay! this is the one i voted for! :))

res :) will b bak after reading :))

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feels like ur rewriting the show!
im loving this atmosphere uve created...
arnav and khushi fighting like kids...
Dhruv instead of NK...
just awesome!

please do update soon! :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Awesome start...!! But plz updat late plz...! Don't forget late 😭

Okay awesome start. I thought it was arnav who u introduced but it came out to be dhruv.

I luv the way the everyone loves kushi...<3

Okay plz update soon 😳
Edited by mansi_47 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
wow zehra, a new SS from you - super awesome news - great great dear
interesting start
will wait for u to update more
thx for the pm as always
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
My My My What a treat, 👏 👏 👏 The first part itself indicates that this is going to be Epic SS.

A jealous Arnav, a smitten Dhruv, a Chirpy Khushi and a Scheming Anjali. What a combination.
Eagerly waiting for next part.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i have nothing to say bcoz its AS AWESOME AS ALWAYS...just superb are they both frnds...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
I love a jealous Arnav...he is so hot!
Did not realise sudden when Dhruv entered, thought that it was a mistake...it was brilliant!
Loved their Nok jhok ...superb superb ! Cannot wait for the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
love it!!! 😆 dhruv s soo charming😉 arnav & khushi know each other for a long time dats awwsum... she calls him laad governer in front of everyone so well.. love the bonding they all share!!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
res

Wow asr brought 2 suitcases of gifts. I so miss this bonding between him and mamiji which was shown only initially in the show. Awww he felt her presence and found the house lively. So dhruv is mesmerized seeing khushi. Who won't b…Simply loved the nok-jhoks between our arshi hayeee..Now asr will b jealous..
I agree with Rasgulla_sp di. Hehe even I too will have to wait for ur two updates eagerly. I just love late and this one has also taken a place in my fav ones' list. Hehe for her nalayek term. U sisters r too cute.


Edited by simi58 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
awesome start...fantastic
i love the twisted tale
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb..really i thought arnav was admiring khushi
dhruv😉

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