*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: A Jalebi-fied Tale

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Lovely one as usual...

Loved the way you introduced Dhruv...I thought it was Arnav...

and the love and support for khushiii...

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

I loved the start... At the beginning you really made us believe that the guy was Arnav. Anjali the match maker has already commenced her job; she surely misses the attention that Arnav and Khushi give each other. Loved Arnav's remark about having a month worth time😆.. Gosh a lot of jealousy and bickering coming up ( doing a happy dance).

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sairam03

@sairam03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

OK you are back ...hum khush... so u picked the J factor for ur ss this time ...wait a minute how fool I am ...Jo diktha woh nahi hotha ...hai na... as always leaving the hard part to write beautiful ss to you let me take the easy part to Enjoy. Thank you dear

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Super awesome part

Just loved the first part...the starting is so interesting...

I loved the way the characters were introduced...very well written

Bubbly Chirpy pagal Khushi and Laad Governor Arnav ...fantastic as always...i love them...

Thank you for the pm...Brilliant update ;)

Also Unbuddy me if you do not wish to receive PMs from me :)

Koi pagal hi hoga jo unbuddy karega...kyunki aise awesome story from an awesome writer se MISS karna impossible hai...

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Awesome update...The first chapter itself is a knock -out...It is really refreshing to read such a simple and sweet SS...feisty khushi,Arrogant Raizada , match maker Raizada and a flirty Raizada...Zabardast combination...Thanks for the PM

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

great concept ji woud love to read further ji:D

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Jujuk

@Jujuk

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Great start !!

Arnav jealous !!! Simply love such scenes !!😆

Update soon !!

Edited by Kashy15 - 12 years ago

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Oh i am loving it so u update soon n let me know!!! Thanks n btw i just love when Arnav gets all irritated n J when guys fuss around Khushi!!!😳

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BarunDiwani

@BarunDiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

NICE START! you left me wanting more!! LOVE jealous Arnav :) lol 5 min meil 4 puris...that is something khushi would do...can't wait for more..no wonder you're so popular, u've got talent!

Edited by BarunDiwani - 12 years ago