*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: A Jalebi-fied Tale

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

New SS from you!!! YAYYY!!!

Loving this already... Very interesting way of introducing Dhruv. Waiting for the sparks to fly off Mr. Jealous Raizada!

Was one of the Calls to a certain Miss KKG??!

Please update soon na...

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Risha J

@-Risha-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

This reminds me of January. I never use Shouty capitals much but I have to say

I LOVE THEM HERE!!!!!!

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Huny

@huny.thebest

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

awesome atarting zehra... 👍🏼

m lovin it...

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shona231289

@shona231289

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Arnav and khushi...super cute :D

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-SI-

@-SI-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Eeks we r going to see jealous Arnav.. This Dhruv story is way better than Shit-al Lady track... Pls cont.soon Zehra I want to see more of jealous Arnav...

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rechup

@rechup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Nice start
i feel something is burning somewhere.
Arnav is jealous.

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Achu

@arshy4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Wow...Wow...Wow..I'm gonna celebrate this...🥳🥳

Superb update...👏👏👏

Read it thrice...😉 Arnav is sooo cute when he is jealous😉...

Khushi rocks as always😛...

Edited by arshy4ever - 12 years ago

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

When I started reading I was thinking about Arnav, well because usually he is the main character, but no it was Dhruv.

Khushi and Arnav they known each other when they ware small, how nice.

Wow Dhruv was mesmerised by Khushi's beauty, I hope he doesn't fall for her, because we all know that Arnav and Khushi are made for each other, not for nothing they say opposites attract. However, I think Anjali want's to use Dhruv to make Arnav jealous. Yes add fuel to fire 😉

Btw the update is really great, the concept is awesome. so let's see what happens. Conitnue soon.