*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: A Jalebi-fied Tale

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Am I the only one who thinks there is something sexy about "hot swollen puris"---?

I love-love-love this story already. Love the dynamic between Arnav & Khushi.

This feels like vintage-IPK to me and makes me sigh with nostalgia.

maya hill

PS You and your sister are so prolific, so clever---can you please tell me what you were fed as children, what is your daily regime, do you have oxygen pumped into your writing studio...in short, to what should we attribute your brilliance? Best to PM reply...😉

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Theepthidevi

@Theepthidevi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Wow. Nice start. Waitin for next update.

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Natasha

@tash10

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Am already loving it!! The title of this SS is super cool!

A jealous Arnav is always a treat to watch, and am sure it's gonna be a fun ride!!

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Zehra..

I just loved it! Another wonderful FF from you on the way!

The title is so wonderful!

A jealous Arnav

A bubbly Khushi

And a haddi in their love ishtory.. Dhruv! Dhruv highly reminded me of NK!

Such a coochie-coochie-coo character he is, isn't he? 😆

And this reminded me of those pre-marriage days where we got to see a flirtatious Arnav!

Anjali is in this. Trying to force out the truth from Arnav!

Awesome!

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@fanAR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

oh my gosh when I was reading description of khushi .. I thought it was Arnav but WOW durhvi :O

i love how Arnav was jealous in the end yaar

amazing update .. it's always treat to read something from you .

please pm too whenever u can :)

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Cheryth

@Cheryth

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Saw the title and I just couldn't stop myself
And boy am I glad it didn't?
This is going to be one fun-ride and I just KNOW it😆

Can feel it in my gut
Aur nahi toh kya

I mean, The combinations I absolutely love are mixed in this SS
But, with some added bonuses😳

Arhi's pretence banter, Their hidden love that sparks in the air, Arnav's green eyed monster (Which I admit I thrive on), Khushi's pagal and gorgeous self

You haven't changed anything much about the characters and I love this fact😊

The added bonus - DHRUV!!!
Why do I have a feeling I'm going to love him
Hahaha
He's smitten by Khushi's beauty
Chal ASR better do something quick😆
Varna tut oh gayi

Anji notices everything around her huh?
And is aware of the triplets feelings
Hmmm
I would love to see how our Anji Di would put her cupid skills to good use *giggles*

Awww Poor ASR left his breakfast unfinished?😲
Oh, he better have his breakfast though without neglecting it
After all he'll need all the energy he can get to put up with the jealousy that I have a feeling would overcome him soon right?
And the challenging fights dat would double between our Arhi along with the jealousy

Would their be clanching fists, raging eyes, pulling, pushing? hehe

Oooh Am super duper excited
Cannot wait for the next chapter
Please. Please. Please. With a yummy cherry on top do update soon LazyLeaves 😳
Overall, I love the descriptive way you've written girl, from the beginning of the chapter to the end 👏
Such a charming SS
with an exiting concept

P.S: Very well written dear - Flawlessly, that I enjoyed every bit!!!⭐️

P.S: Please PM when You update... Please

🤗

Cheers

Edited by Cheryth - 12 years ago

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AbdulloveIPKKND

@AbdulloveIPKKND

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

OMG I loved this and hahaha I couldn't stop on the line Arnav said "that she won't stop" hahahahahahahahahaha LOL. It was hilarious. Hahahaha I can't wait to read the next chapter. PM me.