*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: A Jalebi-fied Tale

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sur91

@sur91

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Ooh another one from u. It would already be amazing, I know that. A jealous arnav is always a great to watch and read and add a flirty dhruv to it and u get such a nice combo

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

I can hug you for this Story 🤗

I loved it!

It brought back the old memories of IPK and jealous Arnav!

And jealous arnav is a delight to watch!

Dhruv eh? Nice!

Waiting for the next update! :) So damn excited!

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rachna

@cicilia9

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

ahhh ,,, jealous arnav ! finally ! love u for this zehra 😃

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

loved the first part..👏happy to see arnav jealous..n a flirty dhruv..aur beech mein phassi khushi😉waiting for the next update😊

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Awesome OS...loved it!!

A jealous Arnav,Flirty Dhruv...

Both are after Khushi...

I love Arhi fights...they are adorable..

This is going to be very interesting...

do continue soon...thanks for the pm..

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desilover101

@desilover101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

oooww is this a jealous arrnav??? i hope so, cause i love so.

Edited by desilover101 - 12 years ago

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

to begin with ...you two (you and your sister simply adorable) kissi ki nazr na lage tum dono ko!!!!

secondly i completely agree with your sister...you should have completed Late first...but whats done is done!!!

i like this story...but I dhruv is in for a heart break here...

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

WOW...Great start. I am really excited about this story. Looking forward to the next update.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Wowiieee.. The series has started.. Coming to it, I was missing this Arnav.. Thank you for introducing him yet again in here.. When you started describing Khushi, I was like "Arnav toh gaya kaam se" but then it was Dhruv.. Jealousy works like nothing else.. I love how Khushi takes care of her Arnav.. Sugar free sheera .. Wah kya pyaar hai.. Let them ignore, Im sure they will comes around and bachoo Dhruv, apni hadh mein rahiyo warna Arnav ka ghussa toh sarva gyaat hai.. 😆

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Nice start... very nice start actually and so very interesting.

Loved the way the story started with the basic flow of how Arnav and Khushi have always fought with each other and how Khushi is like and loved by everyone there and how Dhruv seems smittened with her and Arnav is not gonna like that and also loved that Anjali is gonna turn a match-maker...

Thanks for the PM and update soon.

Edited by swati-89 - 12 years ago