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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: sweatmango

He had never seen her and though he loved her thats quite interesting. Loved the update but my heart is a little heavy reading both of your updates that he is not able to find her.

Next part I would like to read from Khushis POV if you are planning her POV also.

Thanks for the PM.

Hmmm. There is a slight mystery to the never seen her part, so watch out for that in the future :) Im sorry! Its hard for me to write it too 😭

I dont think Im planning Khushi's POV in this...

No problem! Thanks for commenting :)

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

awesome dear and loved it and thanks for the pm

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sruthick

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

So Arnav hav nevr seen Khushi's face... Bt he lovs her...Wow...
Wer s Khushi?? Is she safe??
Awesm update... Cntinue soon

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Manitaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

I love the background of the story. It adds to the mystery. Fab update. Waiting for the next part

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@AJlovesArshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Interesting..
Arnav is yearning to meet Khushi..
I hope he finds her soon..
Update soon.. :)

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: AJlovesArshi
Interesting..
Arnav is yearning to meet Khushi..
I hope he finds her soon..
Update soon.. :)

Thank you! And I hope he does too 😭

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Crinklez.
Love the way you write.

Thank you! I am glad you enjoy my writing :)

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

so sad

is Khushi lost to him forever

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

| Corridors |

Back again my wonderful audience. Here is the Third Chapter of Corridors and I do hope that those reviews keep coming in. I thank you for the appreciation, for it does mean a lot.

Moving along, let me continue where we've left our Arnav.

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Chapter 3 : On The Run

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Here one moment, gone without a trace. The phrase that best described the whereabouts of his inamorata.

Except for that smell.

That omnipresent perfume that pervaded his senses and settled starkly into the confines of his heart.

[On Blog]

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Decent enough guys? Again remember, reviews!

*This work is my own. Do not copy or reproduce without my permission.

Edited by dreamyshadows - 13 years ago