ArHi SS | Corridors | Chapter 5- The End [11/18]

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

beautiful update so there are other out there who religion does not matter he is lucky he found one and he is looking for her that means she is alive hopefully thanks for the pm

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Bushra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

i love partition arhi stories! and i love your writing! i've sent you a buddy request, please PM me when you update! :D

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: cmileyfreaky
i love partition arhi stories! and i love your writing! i've sent you a buddy request, please PM me when you update! :D

Thank you! Im glad you enjoyed :) And I will PM :)

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avchowdhury

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

thanks for the pm great work !!!!!

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sneha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

wonderful update dear 😊

afshaq saved arnav life..but still suspicious about the character..and wen he says "we will.meet soon"

cannot predict wether he is positiv or negativ one..

loved the first two lines specialy of arnav's flashback 😊

update soon and thanks for the pm 😊

Edited by priya00147 - 13 years ago

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sweatmango

@sweatmango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

He had never seen her and though he loved her thats quite interesting. Loved the update but my heart is a little heavy reading both of your updates that he is not able to find her.

Next part I would like to read from Khushis POV if you are planning her POV also.

Thanks for the PM.

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MISTIE

@MISTIE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

oh! he has never seen her face.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

This was just so wonderful..❤️ "It was silent, calm and powerful. Just like his resolve to find Khushi." Simply amazing... 👍🏼

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norolim

@norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: priya00147
wonderful update dear 😊

afshaq saved arnav life..but still suspicious about the character..and wen he says "we will.meet soon"

cannot predict wether he is positiv or negativ one..

loved the first two lines specialy of arnav's flashback 😊

update soon and thanks for the pm 😊

Thank you! And dont worry about Afshaq. He is a nice man! Thank you for reading and commenting :)

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norolim

@norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: mishti_17
This was just so wonderful..❤️ "It was silent, calm and powerful. Just like his resolve to find Khushi." Simply amazing... 👍🏼

Thank you!