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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

I think one of the most beautiful things about this story is how pure their love is. Arnav's love is.

You did a brilliant job in portraying not only the agony and fear that Arnav suffers in each chapter without his Khushi but also the originality and uniqueness in Arnav and Khushi's love!

Continue soon :)

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: shay1990
UPDDAAATEEE!!!!

*Growls at Avi*

DECIDE. THIS OR DKC

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: dreamyshadows

DECIDE. THIS OR DKC

*bows head in defeat*

I can't decide
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Edited by shay1990 - 13 years ago

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: shay1990

*bows head in defeat*

I can't decide
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Adorable much? DKC today, Corridors kal. Okay? :*

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ManmarziyanTeri

@ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: shay1990

*bows head in defeat*

I can't decide
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Update update UPDATE!

This! Because I haven't read the other one 😔

And I will! Soon! I promise! 😃

Update!

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Shay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: dreamyshadows

Adorable much? DKC today, Corridors kal. Okay? :*

SCOORREEE!!!

Thank you *flutters eyelashes at Avi * 😳

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: DropofDew

Update update UPDATE!

This! Because I haven't read the other one 😔

And I will! Soon! I promise! 😃

Update!

Ab woh toh tumhaari galti hai Pinksy *flutters eyelashes*

Kal, this shall be updated. I promise :)

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ManmarziyanTeri

@ManmarziyanTeri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: dreamyshadows

Ab woh toh tumhaari galti hai Pinksy *flutters eyelashes*

Kal, this shall be updated. I promise :)

:( okay *walks off sulking*

I'll be stalking till you update!

And will try and read DKC tonight! 😉

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priyakm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Just read Chapter 2. Afshaq is kinda creepy but kinda cool, I enjoy this character.

Maybe I read too fast but this chapter was less melancholy and I'm kind of happy about that but you know me :P

So proud of you, keep up the brilliant work!

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priyakm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#190

I don't mean to play favorites, and I'm sorry but holy *insert swear word of choice here*. Chapter 3 of this was by far one of my absolute favorite writing pieces of yours to-date. You incorporated philosophy, beautiful word choice, descriptions, dialogue. I'm kind of fangirling right now.

Don't mind me, just FREAKING DYING OVER HERE. Ok i'm done.

So yes, I'm liking this much more than I thought I would, considering my aversion to serious fics xD.

KEEP IT UP WOMAN, YOU'RE GONNA BE A STAR. Well you are already a star, we'll just make you a nebula or something.

Muah :*