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Posted: 13 years ago

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REALLY GOOD :) PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATEPLEASE

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: arshifan1202
REALLY GOOD :) PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATEPLEASE

Thank you! And I will definitely PM :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: chavvi16
that was powerful
and very thought provoking
how did ya get time for another ss dear
dont ya have your hands full as it is
but who am i to complain when you give us another of your brilliant writing
this should be interesting right
where is she a nd how is she
cheers for pm

Thank you so very much Chavvi! Not only for this, but for every single comment you post on all my stories. It is such an amazing thing to have such a loyal reader like you. Thanks so much! <3

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sruthick

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Wer s Khushi? Wat happn 2 her??
This story s really intrstng.. Cntinue soon

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

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| Corridors |

My absolute love for everyone who commented on the First Chapter. Its not easy for me to write this kind of stuff, but your praise makes it better. Thank you so much for your feedback and I hope this one is upto your expectations.

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Chapter 2 : Breathe

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Even before his eyes opened, Arnav knew he wasn't at the place where he had collapsed. That area had been doomed, disgusting and damned. Where he lay now was quieter, calmer and more humane.

This place, wherever he was, belonged to a human being.

[On Blog]

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Decent? Meh? Go ahead guys, give me those reviews! Love you all!

Edited by dreamyshadows - 13 years ago

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khusiarnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Res
Very intriguing dear...
Continue soon!!

Edited by khusiarnav - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

awesome update...

thanks for the pm

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Mahnoor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Loved it thx for the pm dear obviously that burqa girl is our khushi so that means he have never seen her face thats interesting

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Nehasupnfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I'm SO intrigued by this!! The setting is just perfect! I LOVE how pure and innocent Khushi and Arnav's love seems to be..I hope Arnav can find her and I hope this is a happy story! I think the Partition is a time when happiness was needed! Thank you for the PM :) Can't wait to read more!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nehasupnfan
I'm SO intrigued by this!! The setting is just perfect! I LOVE how pure and innocent Khushi and Arnav's love seems to be..I hope Arnav can find her and I hope this is a happy story! I think the Partition is a time when happiness was needed! Thank you for the PM :) Can't wait to read more!

Haha! Thank you so much :) Lets hope its a happy story :)

No pronbs and thanks once again for reading and commenting!