ArHi SS | Corridors | Chapter 5- The End [11/18]

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: aycma98
wow! i'm honestly excited for it!!!! i wouldn't suggest anyone writing these pieces because it takes a lot of patience writing these stories. but with you, i can't expect any less than perfection! without a doubt, i'm sure you will give justice to this story!!! good luck! can't wait to read more!

Thank you so much! I've never written something like this and I just hope it works out :)

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

that was brilliant and something different and pls continue soon. nice start dear and thanks for the pm dear

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@AJlovesArshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

That was an amazing start..
Loved it.. :)
Update soon.. :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

this is awesoem...i'd love to read more of thsi...gr8 plot!!!

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N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

it is very interesting and intense.. i really liked it.. takes into a trance.. a different world.. can smell blood.. beautifully written..

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Shay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Dude that was F**KING FANTASTIC! (Excuse my french)

It's so different, and so refreshing. I don't think i've read anything to do with the hindu-muslim riots on here before. SO good job on that Avi!!!
Moreover, it's just a brilliant start altogether, I absolutely love the way you've described the connection Arnav feels towards Khushi... Especially when he's inhaling in 'her scent'

Also, why is this just an SS?!
I'll twist your arm and get it to be a FF soon enough, don't you worry 😉 lol

Extremely excited for the next update.

Shay X

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dingle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

You must continue this... I neeed to know more.

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Nici0306
it is very interesting and intense.. i really liked it.. takes into a trance.. a different world.. can smell blood.. beautifully written..

Thank you so much!

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: shay1990
Dude that was F**KING FANTASTIC! (Excuse my french)

It's so different, and so refreshing. I don't think i've read anything to do with the hindu-muslim riots on here before. SO good job on that Avi!!!
Moreover, it's just a brilliant start altogether, I absolutely love the way you've described the connection Arnav feels towards Khushi... Especially when he's inhaling in 'her scent'

Also, why is this just an SS?!
I'll twist your arm and get it to be a FF soon enough, don't you worry 😉 lol

Extremely excited for the next update.

Shay X

Aww! Thanks a lot Shay!

There's a reason for it being an SS. Its only going to have Ten chapters. :) Im so glad you're excited 😃

And Im still waiting for Broken Strings Shay! So update soon 😉