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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

I will be honest,the first half of the OS scared ME!And I was thinking ki Zeh wil make me sad,upset...bt than the next half was Soo adorable..al my fears rested in peace!😆I loved the OS.

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Sadaf Rizwan

@saduf

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

it was not at all crappy, i totally loved it actually
totally awesome

Edited by saduf - 12 years ago

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Bewakoof

@Bewakoof

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

haaawww!!! So cute yaar!!!

loved it!

3 kids??? 😲

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gowri1712

@gowri1712

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

superb dear
well written
Love all your works

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sarra0

@sarra0

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Great os, wat atalent u have wen I read the first few lines I thou uh-huh he is seeing them don't tell they have left or have died, and a surprise they were just at the Gupta's.

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sanaroxx

@sanaroxx

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

If you call this wonderful piece of writing as crappy .. Ok I agree its Crappy .. And keep coming more of such crappies because WE all LOVE to read them ⭐️👏!!!

How could you call it crappy... 😭???

Okay now to the OS... Zehra, Please Please forward this one to the Set and request them to include this in the script of theirs and let them show it on TV - The Future...

I swear on that episode CV would be PRAISED than Getting BASHED ... Because its you who is the CV that... I really really wants to see this :( :((( ...

Just a day.. no not a day but just 15 hours he couldnt live without Khushi😆 ?!

He is Arnav Singh Raizada After all.. so we can expect this 😆😆

But how he survived the 15 hours 😆😆😆 LOL ...

First few parts made me think that Khushi and his children are dead 😭 , even Garima's reaction added the fuel to it.. But I felt strange at Buaji's behavior... and when the Lion was out of her Den, I was relaxed ...

I never expected her to be pregnant as they already has got 2..

[ Usually in all FFs/SSs its like that :D but then I knew ''Expect the Unexpected'' when its written by Zehra 😃]

He already planned a 4th one... Damn you Khushi, you wanted just 3😆 !! See your husband needs moreee of them :D :D :D

Atlast finally ASR decides to stay in Mayike ...

Awesome Fabulous Crappy [ as per you ] OS !!!

Thanks for the PM

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Awesome os... u alws gv umexpcted endings... 😊

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Arnav cnt evn stay away frm Khushi 4 15 hrs... So sweet...
Lovly husbnd.. She s really lucky...
Awesm update...

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-SI-

@-SI-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

You nearly gave me a heart attack at the begging... aw, she has gone to her mom's place for the delivery... They've got two kids already... They r going to be a perfect family with three kids.. Aw, amazing Zehra!!