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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

OMG, at first I thought Khushi was dead. Loved the ending. Cute OS. Thanks for the PM.

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Very well written...was a little scared initially but alls well that ends well

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Barun_Riti_LMH

@Barun_Riti_LMH

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

It was superb...
Like others me too scared for first few seconds...
The title is lyk dat too...
But then when i read no one is at home except HP, then i am lyk something is fishy here...hahaha
next two kids...hayee
next arnav at khusi's mayka...
Uske baad to khusi pregnant for third time...
It was simply superb...
U r awesome choti dee..
Love u...<3
PS-ye bilkul v crap nhi tha...its all the way amazing..

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

awesome os

loved it

so cute

first i thousht she left him

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

THIS IS NOT A CRAPPY OS ! 😡

And this was so goood !
Especially the end, haan, beginning me I did think, ki pata nahi what happened !
But then later on, it turned wonderful !!

Haii !
Arnav bitwa is choo cweeet !
Loved it Ze !

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ragvir.fan

@ragvir.fan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Oh gosh i was so scared at the start thnk god u didnt make me cry.
Lovely OS...

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

@melihoney

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

how sweet they are! lovely OS dear but intially u scared me i thought that something happened to khushi lolz. thanks yaar for such a beautiful OS and for the pm too