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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
Part-21..


After the trip,Garv-kashish,sujal-kumud go back 2 mumbai.

Kumud is seen upset. Sujal:what happened kumud?
K:we both hated mumbai.but finally we reached mumbai after sum yrs.
S:what 2 do?4 businees success we'd 2 cum here.but I promise u that we wont hav any worries like b4
K smiles:ur promise is enuf 4 me

Kumud's ph rings:hi kumud
K:hi.but sorry I cant recognize u
She: I wil tell later who I'm.i want 2 see u & sujal 2gether
K:but why?without telling who u r..
She:plz.i'l tell everything wen u guys cum.i'l giv my address
She tells her address.

Sujal cums. K:2day a lady had called.i dunno who she is.but her voice was familiar.she wanted 2 see us.so she gave her address
S:why does she want 2 see us?
K:that I cant understand
S:unknown calls cum 4 a business family.don't mind
K:but this is not such a call.i think we shud go & meet her
S:why?it's a waste of time,my job..
K:plz N:ok

Garv keeps the ph down:nonsense!
Kashish cums:whats the matter?u r so irritated
G:a stupid call.1 lady
K:ur fan?
G:mayb.she wants 2 see us.so she invited us 2 her house.she gave her address too
K:so lets go
G:r u mad?fans usually cum 2 see us.but now we've 2 go there?nonsense
K:what if she's in a condition that prevents from cuming here?
G:anyways,I'm not interested
K:plz garv.we'l go.i like enjoying our stardom.mayb she wants 2 giv us a treat.that mayb the reason why she called us home
G:but.. K:no excuse.we'l go
G:ok,but I 4got her address
K:Oh!u r disgusting.try 2 remember
G:ya,now I remember
K smiles.

Garv-kashish enter the house.they r shocked 2 see sujal-kumud there.
S:u guys r here?kumud,did'nt I tell u that cuming here is waste of time.i cud've done sum satisfying work in this time
Kashish:r u fooling us?sorry garv,I only forced u 2 cum here.now I realize my mistake.i think these guys only called us here 2 show their small house
S is angry:shut up.this is not our house.we r very rich tho we r not rockstars like u 2.u thot only rock stars hav gud house?u r wrong
G:enuf,kashish,we'l go
G-kash start walking out.1 lady's voice:plz don't go
They turn back & is shocked
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
ok but try to post soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
Part-22….Kashish:simon!
Garv:I just cant belive its u
Simon is in wheelchair.a maid is near her
S:I only called u guys here.so plz don't fight abt it
Kash:how cum u like this?
S:I'm punished 4 my bad deeds
G:what?
S:yes.kumud has heard my voice manytimes over the ph.wen u garv & kashish met in the restaurant,I informed kumud that u r 2gether
All r shocked. Kumud:that was u?
S:yes.while garv & kashish were celebrating holi,I mixed sleeping pills with bang.so they fell asleep without knowing anything.i took its video & sent it 2 u & that caused misunderstandings btw u guys & led 2 ur separation
All r shocked.
S:belive me,garv-kumud as well as sujal-kashish haven't cheated each other.its me who cheated on u
They r stunned.all r silent.tears fall from their eyes.
S bursts into tears:I did like this 2 gain garv.
Again every1 in shock.
S:I used 2 luv him since college.but he married kumud.so I broke their relation thru sujal-kashish.i won in that.but again I failed.garv married kashish.i wanted 2 break that relation too.but I was punished by a heavy accident.i was unconscious 4 more than 1month.I was saved.but I lost my legs as well as my loved ones.i wanted 2 inform u guys the truth atleast now.otherwise god wil never 4giv me.
All r stunned.Kumud screams:why did u do this?
Kumud runs out crying.S cries.Sujal does'nt no what 2 do.bcoz on 1 side kumud has gone out with tears.on other side kashish is standing still with tears.Slowly Suj goes out near Kumud.K is crying like anything.Su is trying 2 control his tears.
Ku:we were wrong sujal
S is silent.

Kashish luks at Garv.G is silent. K:Garv!
G is not moving. K:Garv!
Suddenly G bursts into tears.K also cries along with him. G:no one can 4giv us

S is weeping seeing this.

Suj & Kumud at home.S:whats the use of crying like this?I think now what we shud do is 2 apologize
K:but simply apologizing wont heal the wounds caused by us
S is speechless.

Both the cuples reach the same place.garv-kumud & sujal-kashish luk at each other with tears.G-S & Ku-kash hug each other with tears.
Dead leaves r flying over there.
G-kash go 2 1 side while Su-ku 2 the opposite side.they hav pain inside the mind.they both turn back.song:tu jahaan…{salam namaste}
The souls of sujal & kashish cum out from their bodies & hug wile the same thing happened btw garv & kumud.

Garv-kashish r shopping.G chooses a cream sari. Kash:not this.u no sujal selects the most wonderful dresses
Suddenly K is aware of what she's telling:sorry,this is enuf
G:no.u r rite.only sujal can choose properly
K is dull:lets go.i don't feel like shopping
G-kash r shocked 2 see sujal-kumud there.They hav painful smile.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
Part-22….Kashish:simon!
Garv:I just cant belive its u
Simon is in wheelchair.a maid is near her
S:I only called u guys here.so plz don't fight abt it
Kash:how cum u like this?
S:I'm punished 4 my bad deeds
G:what?
S:yes.kumud has heard my voice manytimes over the ph.wen u garv & kashish met in the restaurant,I informed kumud that u r 2gether
All r shocked. Kumud:that was u?
S:yes.while garv & kashish were celebrating holi,I mixed sleeping pills with bang.so they fell asleep without knowing anything.i took its video & sent it 2 u & that caused misunderstandings btw u guys & led 2 ur separation
All r shocked.
S:belive me,garv-kumud as well as sujal-kashish haven't cheated each other.its me who cheated on u
They r stunned.all r silent.tears fall from their eyes.
S bursts into tears:I did like this 2 gain garv.
Again every1 in shock.
S:I used 2 luv him since college.but he married kumud.so I broke their relation thru sujal-kashish.i won in that.but again I failed.garv married kashish.i wanted 2 break that relation too.but I was punished by a heavy accident.i was unconscious 4 more than 1month.I was saved.but I lost my legs as well as my loved ones.i wanted 2 inform u guys the truth atleast now.otherwise god wil never 4giv me.
All r stunned.Kumud screams:why did u do this?
Kumud runs out crying.S cries.Sujal does'nt no what 2 do.bcoz on 1 side kumud has gone out with tears.on other side kashish is standing still with tears.Slowly Suj goes out near Kumud.K is crying like anything.Su is trying 2 control his tears.
Ku:we were wrong sujal
S is silent.

Kashish luks at Garv.G is silent. K:Garv!
G is not moving. K:Garv!
Suddenly G bursts into tears.K also cries along with him. G:no one can 4giv us

S is weeping seeing this.

Suj & Kumud at home.S:whats the use of crying like this?I think now what we shud do is 2 apologize
K:but simply apologizing wont heal the wounds caused by us
S is speechless.

Both the cuples reach the same place.garv-kumud & sujal-kashish luk at each other with tears.G-S & Ku-kash hug each other with tears.
Dead leaves r flying over there.
G-kash go 2 1 side while Su-ku 2 the opposite side.they hav pain inside the mind.they both turn back.song:tu jahaan…{salam namaste}
The souls of sujal & kashish cum out from their bodies & hug wile the same thing happened btw garv & kumud.

Garv-kashish r shopping.G chooses a cream sari. Kash:not this.u no sujal selects the most wonderful dresses
Suddenly K is aware of what she's telling:sorry,this is enuf
G:no.u r rite.only sujal can choose properly
K is dull:lets go.i don't feel like shopping
G-kash r shocked 2 see sujal-kumud there.They hav painful smile.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
jasmine dear sorry i could not comment on all these parts........actually me was busy with college work...... 😭 hope you understand... 😃 now coming to the parts they are totally awesome , cool , mind blowing , too damn good , very very nice.......i totally loved the parts............ 👏
u keep up the good work...the parts were just really coolllllllllllllllllll............ 👍🏼 please sujal kashish , garv kumud ko jaldi se milwana.. 😉 .
plz continue soon...me will be waiting..... 😛
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
Part-23…Garv:sujal…kashish did'nt like my selection of dress.wil u plz choose a nice sari 4 her
Sujal & kashish r shocked.
G:Plz S hesitates. Kumud:plz choose one 4 kashish.she likes ur selection very much
Slowly S cums 4ward & stands near kash.They both luk each other.S luks at the saries.
He imagines K in each sari.finally he chooses a nice pink sari & puts it on her body:it luks pretty on u
G & KU smile.Kash is stunned.
Suddenly S is aware of what he's doing. S:sorry
S takes the sari from her body & gives it 2 her hand.
S goes out without telling anything.Ku & G luk at each other.Kash notices it & smiles.
Ku:sujal went.i've 2 go now G:ok
Ku goes.G is sad.


Garv-kashish in the car. G:don't u luv sujal?
Kash is shocked. G:I no that evenif u wont tell anything
K is speechless. K:even I saw luv in ur eyes 4 kumud
G:I admit.i luv kumud.i crave 4 her like u crave 4 sujal.don't u feel like going back 2 him?
K:yes S:I also feel the same.but it'l never happen.bcoz we r already married
K weeps:if we had'nt done that blunder…
G is upset.

Kumud is crying near sujal. K:I luv garv.i cant 4get him
S is upset:I think wen we thot we hate garv & kashishalso we'd luv 4 them.that's why they always came b4 us.we were happy with each other.but still sumthing was lacking.it was their luv.we cud'nt 4get our past.
K:I wish our past is back with a new happy form
S:its our dream.but is it going 2 happen?
K is stunned & bursts into tears.
S:if we becum practical,we no that its not going 2 happen.bcoz garv & kumud r very far from us.we cant reach them.do u think garv luvs u like u luv him?
K is speechless:mayb he loves kashish now.but I luv him & cant liv happily without him
S:even I'l b happy only with kashish.but I don't think she loves me.i've 2 adit with pain that her present is not me,but garv
Tears fall from S's eyes.

Valentine's day.Kumud gets up from the bed & says herself:happy valentine's day garv
Garv gets up from the bed:why do I feel that kumudwished me?happy valentine's day kumud
Kashish thinks:however busy,sujal used 2 giv me valentine's gifts.but now…
Sujal thinks abt his past:
S tells Kash:happy valentine's day
He gives flowers,dresses & perfumes.
K:thax a lot S:where is my valentine's gift?
Kash is shy & hugs him.

A party.Garv-kashish,sujal-kumud r there.Kashish has worn a shining red sari.kumud has worn a white shining sari.they both hav matching ornaments.They luk at each other. A guy:this is a day 4 luvly cuples like u all
Kumud thinks:I lost my valentine.now what valentine's day


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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
awwwwn....i feel soo bad for both of da couples......n simon...she deserved all ths.....gud job on ur story...i ll b eagerly waitin 4 da nxt part....n i m sure its gonna b awesome....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
nice part 👏 👏 👏 but m feeling sad 4 them 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
jasmine dear a wonderful ,too good , lovely , very nice part... 👏
👏 seriously your story is very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very intresting..........keep up the good work... 👍🏼 dear u know what me very happy that sujal kashish , garv kumud are coming back together slowly..i hope on valentine's day the respective couples get back together.... 😉 now please continue soon..me will be waiting... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
jasmine dear please continue soon..me waiting... 😃

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