Fanaa-Garv,Kumud,sujal,Kashish

Part-1…Sujal & kumud in a moving boat.K has kept her
face on S's shoulder.
S:I dunno why but I feel that this boat is going 2 sink
K is not reacting.
S:don't u feel anything?
K :no,bcoz u r there with me.so I'm not scared
S smiles.they both hold their hands 2gether.
The boat is about 2 sink.K screams.They both fall down
into the water.K is drowning.
S swims in the river & saves K.K is unconscious.S gives
her breath with his breath.K opens her eyes slowly.
K :sujal..once wen my life was sinking,u saved me &
gave me a new life.now wen I was drowning & dying,u gave
me breath.u r gr8
S keeps her finger on K's lips:now don't say anything
more
K weeps.S sings:kuch na kaho…{1942 luv story}K smiles.S
carries her in his arms.it rains.
K closes her eyes & thinks:why this rain is bringing me
pain?why is it reminding me of my past that I want 2
4get?
A scene cums 2 her mind:Garv & kumud standing close 2
each other in rain.
Tears cum out of her eyes.S did'nt notice it

That night a big music show was taking place.The rock
star Garv is on the stage.Ppl r jumping with joy.
The n cums Kashish 2 the stage.she has short hair.Has worn
orange salwar kameez with a wonderful duppatta.
The y both perform 2gether:rabba..{mujhe kuch kehna hai}
K umud switches on the tv.she sees it's live telecast
going on on tv.she gets angry & switches it ff & throws
the remote control.it falls on sujal's feet.
K :I'm sorry sujal
S :suddenly what happned 2 b angry?
K :I wanted 2 ignore sum ppl in my life.but they r on tv
2 irritate me
S :who?
K :cant u guess?
S :garv?
K :not only garv.kashish too
S is shocked.a flashback scene:Kashish feeding sujal
with her hand.they both r laughing.
S wipes his tears. K:however we try 2 move far away from
the m,why r they coming close 2 us?
S is speechless.

CAN U PREDICT WHAT HAD HAPPENED IN THEIR PAST LIFE?

awesome start!!!!continue soon!! 👏

nice story jasmine...i guess kumudgarv n kashsujal used 2 like each oder...but sumthin happened...will b lookin fwd 2 da nxt part...

Part-2…Every1 enjoys Garv-kashish's show.

Garv-kashish in the room.
G:as we expected our show became a big hit
K smiles:its bcoz of u.if garv is there,wi the show b a flop?
G:but ur contribution cant b ignored
K:what did I do garv?
G:ur performance was rocking & u r my inspiration.if u were not there,the rock star garv wud've finished long ago.wen I was completely lost,u were the one who brought me back 2 life
K:wen I was suffering,u saved me.otherwise I wud've gone mad.
K's eyes burn with anger:sujal..u thot u can break me.but u cud'nt.bcoz angad is there with me.he gives me all the happiness of this world
G is angry:Kumud,u thot without u,I'm nothing.but wen kashish came 2 me,I became more lucky.while ur career shattered,kashish's career graph gone up
K:why r we wasting our time thinking abt our past.cant we think of our present & future
G smiles:u r right.we shud celebrate the success of our show
K:ofcourse.i'll arrange everything 4 the party


Party…Garv luks hot in his outfit.Kashish has worn a shining white tight frock.
All r enjoying the party.
G:guys,we r celebrating the success of our show
Press media ppl r after them.
1 guy with the mike:whats the secret of ur success Mr.Garv Sachdev?
G keeps kash 2 him:no doubt,its my beautiful wife Kashish.if she was'nt there with me,I dunno what wud've been my fate.she brought luck 2 life

Sujal-kumud who r watching this live on tv get irritated.Ku thinks:his wife kashish is his success?Kashish,taking my position,u r sitting happily with garv.what kind of a girl u r!u cheated on me as well as sujal
S thinks:snatching kashish from me,u r enjoying luck?this happiness won't last long

Garv:lets dance & rock guys
All the cuples r on the dance floor.G & K hold hands 2gether & dance.song:koi aap sa….

S & Ku get irritated seeing their romantic dance.
Ku thinks:garv is nobody 2 me.i hate him.then also why I'm feeling uncomfortable seeing him with kashish?
S thinks:Kashish,how cud u go away from me?still I cant bear u with any other guy.i just neglect u.but why u r coming b4 me always?

Sujal cums & holds kumud from back.K:whats this sujal?
S laughs:see hat gift I've brought 4 u
N shows tickets:tickets 4 our trip 2 paris
K:wow!u r so sweet sujal
S:now only u realized that I'm sweet
K smiles:no,I new it b4 itself.that's why I caught ur hand & entered into ur life
S smiles.

Garv tells kash:I'm not satisfied with our celebration
K:why,u did'nt like the party?
G:yes.but my happiness is so much that one party is not enuf.so lets go 2 paris 2 hav joy
K smiles:garv,u r a real celebrity who wants 2 enjoy life 2 the fullest
G:life is 2 enjoy kashish.kumud did'nt allow 2 enjoy.so I dumped her
K becomes dull G:now I enjoy,bcoz u r there with me
K smiles

hi jasmine nice beginning to the story. Pls continue soon

jasmine dear sorry could not comment for all these days......your new story is very nice & intresting..keep up the good work...👏ab ke liye bas itna chota comment post kar rahi hoon but me will comment later in detail....😊😃😛 u plz continue soon....😊😃😛

Part-3….Sujal-kumud enter the flight.Wen they were busy talking,Garv-kashish enter.so they did'nt see each other.Both the cuples enjoy talking.
In the airport,also they walk close 2 each other.but they did'nt see each other.

Sujal-kumud go out.
K:wow!paris is so beautiful
S:that's why I brought u here


Garv-kashish go out.K:I never thot paris is such a beautiful place
G:but I new that pairs is beautiful.that's why I brought u here.bcoz since paris is beautiful,it needs only beautiful girls like u
K smiles:garv…u…
G smiles:I'm serious ok
K smiles.They both laugh.
K:why don't we go 2 the church?

Suddenly a flashback scene cums into Garv's mind.
Garv-kumud in goa.K in a shortskirt & short top.G is also in shorts without short.
G:u luk so hot
K:garvvvvvv.stop it
G:I'm serious yaar.tell,how do I luk in this dress?
K:I feel that u hav no dress.shirtless.a very short bottom
G is shy.
K:but still…
G is eager 2 hear:still…I no what u r going 2 say,still I'm hot & handsome
K:oh really?
G:I gave u such a wonderful compliment & u r not giving me any compliment
K:so u gave me a compliment 2 hear compliment from me?
G:yaaa
K:so u were simply telling that I'm hot?
G:ya K:so u did'nt feel that I'm hot?
G pulls her close 2 him:u r very pretty
K smiles.
Both of them play in beach water.

They wear proper dress.K:we'l go 2 church.i heard that goa's church is very powerful
G:as u wish
They smile & go 2 church & pray
G:what did u pray?
K holds his hand:I prayed 2 bring us 2gether always.our relationship IS ETERNAL.NO ONE CAN BREAK IT

G thinks:but we broke.why each & everything reminds me of kumud?
G:no need of going 2 church.it irritates me.it reminds me of a person whom I hate
Kashish:but plz cum with me 4 my sake
G:ok

They go 2 church.sujal-kumud also reach there.K thinks:its in a church that me & garv promised that we'l always remain 2gether.but…
K wipes her tears.

After the prayer,garv-kashish,sujal-kumud see each other

WHAT'L B THEIR REACTION 2 MEET AFTER A LONG TIME?

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Part4…They r shocked.
Kumud thinks:after a long time…
Garv thinks:why did kumud cum b4 me after so much of time?
Sujal thinks:time passed,but the faces r not changed
Kashish thinks:sujal & kumud in the same place..
Both the cuples go from there without even speaking.


Garv is angry:how cum kumud & sujal here?
Ka:whats the use of getting angry?
G:then what can I do?
K:u r so angry 2 see them.u said u'l scream at kumud if u see her.but u did'nt open ur mouth wen u saw her
G is speechless.G thinks:why cud'nt I shout at her?what makes me avoid scolding her?
G:even u did'nt speak
K:I want 2 4get my past.i just want 2 ignore sujal.4 me he does'nt exist in this world
K's eyes get filled up with tears.K wipes it & thinks:I hate sujal,but still why my eyes r getting wet thinking of him?


Sujal is sitting quietly.Kumud cums near him with tears:sujal!
s luks at K:kashish with garv.i really cud'nt tolerate it
K:why?
S is speechless.S thinks:what makes me think so?why shud I care whether she's with garv or not as she's already out of my life.i don't care about kashish
K thinks:there r certain things that we cant 4get however we try.it's the truth of our life

Kumud thinks of her past.
A few yrs back..K in a village.she has worn a beautiful salwar.Long hair.Has a nose ring.She's singing & dancing: Des Rangila{Fanaa}

Part-5…..Kumud is nervous.Her mom gayatri cums:ma,how wil b city life?I feel nervous
G:its ur decision 2 go 2 city
K:that's bcoz I want 2 make up my career.its my dream 2 b a famous singer.that's why I'm going 4 audition
Her dad suryaban:go & win my daughter.no need of tension.u'l win
K smiles:I'm going with ur blessings
S pats her.

K reaches mumbai.she feels strange.she stays in the hostel.she goes 4 audition.There a car cums.A glamorous guy with sun glasses cum out of it.All the girls go after him 4 autograph.
K:who is he?why r every1 after him?
Then she sees his face.she was excited:That's rockstar Garv,he's my judge
K smiles.K tries 2 see his face again & again.But the crowd covers him & she cant see him.

The audition is started.All the girls hav worn modern dresses like shorts & jeans.So wen K entered the hall in Punjabi salwar,every1 started laughing.
"see her patiala bottom."Garv smiles.
K becomes sad.her eyes get filled up with tears.
G feels pity 4 her:ur gud name?
K:Kumud
G:Miss Kumud,r u confident of ur talent?
K:yes garvji
G:no need of 'ji'.call me garv.where r u from?
K:Punjab
G:ok,if u confident why r u becoming upset hearing sum1 telling sumthing?
K:I'm from a village.there no one is bothered about our luks.they giv imp 2 talent.but here…that's why
G:here also talent is imp.so u can sing without no tension
K sings: Des Rangila..
K is eager 2 no G's reaction. G:why did u choose this song?it seems 2 b patriotic
K:I like this kind of songs very much.i luv my India.i want all the Indians 2 hold hands 2gether
G smiles:ok,now I'm going 2 anmounce the winners.He announces the top 7 guys.K loses her confidence.K thinks:my name is not announced.i'm rejected bcoz of my luk
G:the last luckiest person is kumud
K is surprised:thanku
G smiles:now did u understand that we also giv imp 2 talent
K smiles. G:among the girls chosen I'l choose the best person as my jodi 4 shows.that person is…
All the girls r eager 2 no.

WHO'L B THAT GIRL?