Fanaa-Garv,Kumud,sujal,Kashish - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
jasmine plz continue soon me very eager to know what happens next..... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
Part-17…Garv was clapping:wow!very nice scene
Sujal:what do u mean?
Kashish cums from G's back:I'l tell u.we cud see u both enjoying each other's company
S:what do u mean kashish?
Ka:u fought with me & is enjoying with kumud?
Kumud loses control:enuf kanan.its more than enuf.u both made us upset.sujal gave me shelter & comfort.he's really gr8 as a friend
G:enuf kumud.no need of this drama.we were shocked 2 see u guys suspecting us.we r too foolish 2 search 4 the person who tried 2 destroy us.we were wondering..we don't hav enemies.then who Can do such a cheap thing with us.now we realized who did it 2 us.u both did it
Ku shouts:Garv!why shud we do it?
H:no need of acting.since u both were madly in luv,u wanted 2 get rid of us.so u planned this cd 2 avoid us
S shouts:Garv!
Kash:whats the need of shouting at garv.we never thot that u both r the real cheaters.i'm ashamed 2 tell u that I used 2 luv u
G:we cant carry the burden anymore.lets get separated from each other.the only solution is divorce
S & Ku r stunned. S:ok
Kash thinks:wen garv told abt divorce sujal agreed without 2nd thots.he hates me that much.its all bcoz of kumud.u'l never get peace kumud

Their divorce takes place.All r depressed.They cant face each other.all the eyes r full of tears.They think of their past.song:tu jaha

Garv is upset. Kash:u were the one who used 2 giv me strength.but now u seem 2 b very weak.
G:sumtimes wen luv is missing,our strength gets lost
K becomes upset:its true.whatever we've,without luv life is nothing.but still we've 2 liv.so u need 2 get rid of ur past.
G:I don't think its possible
K was confident:its possible

Edited by jasminerahul - 19 years ago
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#43
jasmine dear a very very very coolllllllll part.................... 👏 but me very damn sad because sujal kashish , garv kumud have got separated.......... 😭 dear please unite sujal kashish , garv kumud soon in the present....i can't see them staying separate & crying for each other...& me know you will surely start solving their misunderstandings soon........ 😉 dear waise it is very sad that sujal kashish are divorced & even garv kumud are divorced.... 😭 me just thinking what will these four do the day simon's truth is out...sinom ki tho baand bajegi.....baand bajayenge sujal aur garv aur barathi honge kashish aur kumud... 😆
please continue as soon as possible dear........ 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
hey jasmine... good part... 👏
but saddy saddy.... 😭 😕
do cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
awww!
jasmine di continue soon please!
i cant wiat for the next part!
sorry i ddidnt update i went for vacations!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
nice part...it was soo sad...seems like all 4 of them locked up dair brains n r simply usin dair eyes.(does ths sentence even make sense--o well 😆 😆 )...newayz....plz update soon...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
Part-18…Kashish:thru music u can 4get ur worries.music wil bring a new life 2 u
Garv:but I don't hav a mood 2 sing
K:don't tell like that.now only we r sad.but if u don't sing,ur thousands of fans wil also b sad.don't worry abt kumud's absense.we'l choose another talented girl as ur jodi
G:no need of that.i've already chosen my jodi
K:really?that's gud.who is she?
G:u K is surprised:what?what r u telling?
G:u'vent tried big platforms yet.but the truth is that u r so talented that u deserve a big platform
K:but garv..
G:no excuse.if u want me 2 perform,u must b there with me
K smiles & holds his hands:I'l b there with u

Garv & kashish perform 2 ah ah aashqil{36 china town}the show becomes a big hit.
K is thrilled:I never thot it'l become such a big hit
G:but I was sure abt the success
K holds G's hand:its all bcoz of u.thanx a lot
K hugs G.

They both do many hit shows 2gether & become a popular jodi.Kumud feels sad abt it.
Sujal tells kumud:I no u r sad seeing another one in ur position both personally & professionally.u r talented,why don't u do individual shows
K:no sujal.i'm fed up of a celebrity life.it snatched my happiness.i want 2 hav a simple life.
S:but kumud..
K:plz don't tell anythingelse.music reminds me of garv.so I want 2 b away from it

Garv-kashish in a room.Current goes.Thunder's sound makes K scared. K:ahhhhh
K stands close 2 G 4 strength.G hesitates 2 hold her closer.but finally he extends his hand & holds her tightly.
G-K luk at each other's eyes 4 sumtime.K moves away from him.
Kashish is on her bed:whats happening 2 me?why I'm relieved wen garv is there with me?
G thinks:why I feel special wen kashish is with me?

G-kash in a party.All the cuples r asked 2 dance.1 guy cum near G-kash who r watching other's dance:why u both r sitting alone?cum & dance
K:sorry,we r not like u think.we r not a cuple
He:wen I saw ur face itself felt that u've cum here after a fight.but however u fight plz don't tell that u both r not a cuple.this is a happy occasion.so 4get ur problems & enjoy
K:but plz listen
He:no excuse
He takes them 2 the dance floor.K:why did'nt u tell him that I'm not ur wife?
G:bcoz I wanted 2 dance with u
Both laugh. They both dance 2 Ache lagte ho{kuch na kaho}
They both r luking at each other's eyes.K is shy.K thinks:why do feel shy seeing his eyes?earlier I never used 2 feel this with garv
G thinks:I really feel that my relation with kashish has changed

They both go 2 a temple.Panditji blesses them:let god bless u with a happy married life
They r stunned.They go out. G:now I realized that luv is necessary in life.we cant liv without it.i found my luv.its u kashish
K is surprised
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
woawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......garv nakash havin feelings 4 each oder....but hope dey vanish soon cuz sujal has 2 cum baqi n kash's life....hai na????
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
Part-19…Kashish:garv,do u no what u r saying?
G:yes.we'd a bitter past.but it'l b foolish 2 think of sum1 who betrayed us & cry thru out.
G keeps his arm on K's shoulder:we both r happy with each other.then why don't we liv each other?
Tears fall down from her eyes & hugs him.
They spent romantic moments with each other.song:tauba{chalte chalte}

Garv-kashish's wedding takes place in a grand way.they both sing & dance.sujal-kumud r really hurt 2 see it on tv.
G-kash's 1st nite.
G:it's a sweet revenge on kumud who thot I cant liv without her
Kash:sujal played with my feelings.but I'm sure that my life with u wil b extremely wonderful
They both smile & hug.

Kumud is crying.sujal is near her.
K:tho I was angry with garv,I really wanted him 2 cum back 2 me.but now everything is over.kashish entered his life
S:kashish had already entered his life.now they just got married.that's the only difference.while they were with us,their mind was sumwhere else.
K:yes S:why shud we waste our time by thinking over sum stupid cheaters?
K:u r right
K wipes her tears.

Months passed.Kumud is in her house at Punjab.S cums there.it was a surprise.
K:sujal?what a pleasant surprise.u r so busy.then also..
S:4 sum matters,however busy we r we've 2 leave everything
K wonders:4 that what happened specially?
S:nothing special happened.but I want it 2 happen.that's why I came here
K:I did'nt get
S:wen u were here,I really felt lonely.i need sum1 in my life 2 share everything.then I realized that that special person shud b u.i don't hav any doubt abt it.what I crave is 4 ur presense.
K is shocked.
S:kumud,wil u cum 2 my life with pleasure?
K is confused. S:u can take ur own time 2 think.i'l b there in my hose.i'm not going soon 2 mumbai.
S goes.
Gayatri cums near K:what's the matter beti?
K:maa..sujal proposed 2 me
G is shocked.slowly she smiles.
G:whats wrong with that?
K:maa..but.. G:r u still thinking abt the person who betrayed u?
K:never.i've 4gotten my past
G:then what makes u hesitate 2 accept this proposal?
K:I dunno G:u both r very nice.but unfortunately destiny played with ur life & had lots of pain.but destiny wants u both 2 b happy.thats why sujal felt like marrying u.why don't u marry him & liv happiily instead of thinking of the dark past?
K:u r right maa.i'l marry sujal & show garv how happy I'm
G smiles.

K goes 2 Sujal's house.S is tensed abt K's decision. K:I've decided
S:what? K:I'm willing 2 marry u
S is happy.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
Part-20..sujal-kumud's wedding takes place in Punjab.
1st nite.S cums.K is nervous.
S:no need of getting tense
K:suujal…S:I said I need u in my life,not as a wife.but as a friend.but since we r a boy & a girl,if we stay 2gether in the same house,ppl wil see us in a diff way.that's why I decided 2 marry u
K is wondered.
S:but I really wish if I cud luv u.bcoz luv is essential in one's life
K is stunned.
K thinks:do I really crave 4 luv?I dunno

S:I'm thinking 2 go back 2 switzerland
K:no plz sujal
S:then u want 2 stay in this place which gave only worries
K:no.i think we shud go 2 another state.that's enuf

S tells aftersumtime:I thot about ur suggestion.its gud.we'l go 2 delhi
K smiles:delhi is a nice place

Many months passed.sujal-kumud r gud friends.
K thinks:I'm so happy with sujal.wen garv betrayed me,I thot my life is over.i lost my breath.but sujal gave me a breath.now I feel peace has cum back 2 me.its only bcoz of him.am I falling in luv?

K is sitting outside near fire.but its very cold.she's shivering.S cums near her & covers her with a blanket.K & S luk at each other 4 sumtime.
K thinks:now I realize that I've feelings 4 sujal

Next day K thinks:now I cant shut up my feelings.i'l tell him that I luv him.but how?
K is tensed while she goes 2 S.she shivers.
S:I've brought a gift 2 u
K is surprised.S gives it.
K goes 2 her room with thrill.K:what wil b the gift?
She opens the cover.it's a doll.K feels awkward:sujal gave me a doll?is it the present every girl longs 4?seeing the gift,I 4got 2 make a frank confession too.i simply wasted my time.
K is so angry that she throws the doll tightly on the florr.The doll starts making sound:I luv u
K is surprised:that means sujal presented this as a part of his confession of luv?
K takes the doll from the floor & kisses it:sorry
K runs out of the room.S is tensed 2 luk at K.K smiles.S is relieved.K runs 2 his arms.

Flashback is over

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