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Posted: 19 years ago
#21

jasmine dear first of all me very sorry that i did not comment on your story all these days it is just that life has become a bit hectic... sorry once again.... 😭 i hope you understand.......... 😃 😊 😛 😃 😊 😛 😃 😊 😛 😃 😊 😛 😃 now as for the story is concerned it was totally rocking like all your other stories........ 👏 i enjoyed reading the parts posted uptil now.. they were really very nice...keep up the good work........... 👏
i hope sujal , kashish aur garv , kumud ke beech joh bhi differences hain ghalatfaimiyaan hain woh jald se solve ho jaye & all get back to their original partners.... kyunke aaj bhi juda hoke bhi woh log ek dusare ko chahthe hain aur ek dusare ke baare mein hi sochthe hain....😉 please get sujal & kashish together & garv & kumud together...... 😉
from now on me will comment regularly... you please continue soon..i'll be waiting............ 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#22
Part-11..Flashback:
Garv-kumud became really close 2 sujal-kashish.
S-K also settled in India.

Kumud is sleeping.Garv sits close 2 her & whispers 2 her ears:cum on get up.why r u sleeping in this time?we'l go out & hav dinner
K:I'm tired.so I cant cum
G is irritated:u r becoming a real middleclass Punjabi.that's why wenver I call u,u r telling sum stupid reasons 2 back out
K is shocked at G's reaction.She is upset.
G is about 2 go.
K:where r u going?
G:4 dinner.u thot I'l sacrifice my interests 4 u?never
G goes.K is upset:what happened 2 garv?

G goes 2 the restaurant.there he was shocked 2 see kashish sitting alone.G goes there:kashish
K:hi garv.where is kumud?
G:she did'nt cum.sujal?
K is speechless.
G:kashish..
K wipes her tears. G:kashish?
K:sujal shouted at me
G:4 what?
K:he's a real villager tho he lived 4 so many yrs in Switzerland.he thinks only of himself.he sees only his work,not me.as a wife,I thirsted 4 his presense.but he does'nt care abt my happiness.he is thinking how 2 make his business successful.he is always busy.he is hardly seen at home.now I called him 2 cum with me 2 hav dinner.but he refused.i opened my heart 2 show the terrible feelings I've bcoz of me.so he shouted at me.so I get out of the house 2 cum here 4 peace
G thinks:like sujal hurt kashish,kumud hurt me

Kumud is worried as G has'nt returned back:its so late.where is garv?
She calls sujal:I'm kumud.did garv cum there?
S:no K is tensed:then where he'l b
S:even I'm upset.Kashish has'nt cum back
K:what?both garv & kashish r not with us?what does it mean?
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#23
jasmine dear this story of your's fanaa ab iske baare mein what can i tell..... it is very coolllllllllllllllllllllllllll , goodddd , nice.... i liked reading it very much.. you keep up the good work...... 👏
this story is very intresting & different from all your other stories...... 👏 dear me have a request in this story you write more about kumud & garv 😭 but please write about sujal kashish also.... 😃
waise dear me waiting for the time when all the misunderstandings between the four of them will be sorted out & they will start coming closer to each other.............. me will be very happy if their misunderstandings start getting solved........ 😉
now you please continue soon........me waiting eagerly.......... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
Part-12…There was a girl who was watching Garv-kashish in the restaurant.she has an evil smile:wow!what a sight!
She goes near them normally as if she does'nt no anything
GArv:don't worry kashish.in married life,problems happen.don't take it serious.this is normal btw husband & wife.sujal is short tempered.but he is a very nice man.he loves u very much
Kashish cries:I no that.i luv sujal.
G:I'm ur best friend no?
K:yes G:then u shud'nt cry
G wipes K's tears.
Suddenly they see that girl.
G:I've seen u sumwhere
K:this is simon.our collegemate
G:oh!sorry I 4got ur face
Simon thinks:u 4got my face.but I can never 4get ur face
S:its ok.every1 tells that I've changed a lot,so no 1 can recognize me

sujal cums 2 kumud's house.K:did u no anything?
S:no,I tried 2 contact kashish.but her mobile is switched off
K:same with garv's mobile too

Simon phones Kumud's house:is it kumud?
K:yes.who is speaking?
S:that's not imp now.i no that u r tensed about ur hubby's absense.i can help u
K:how?u no where he is?
K talks 2 S. K:sujal,cum with me
They both go 2 the restaurant.

Garv tells kash:u shud'nt fight with sujal.u shud b calm.make him happy as he'l having tensions abt his job
K:yes garv.u r such a nice friend
They both hug.sujal-kumud who reach there r shocked 2 see it

WILL THEY SEE GARV-KASHISH'S FRIENSHIP IN A DIFFERENT WAY?
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#25
jasmine dear a very nice part...this is very very intresting..... 👏 so it is simon behind everything , she is the crook......uski tho main..........i seriously want to kick her.... 😡 hey but how can sujal & kumud misunderstand kashish & garv's friendship.. 😭 afterall even they are friends right.. this is very bad on kumud & sujal's part..they don't have belief in their partners........ 🤢
anyway the part was good..... 😃
please continue soon.... 😊 😛 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
Part-13…Kumud:Garv!
Garv-kashish r shocked 2 see Sujal-Kumud.
G:u both here?
K:u did'nt expect us here?
G:no,u were sleepy
Sujal:we both were tensed abt ur absense & u guys r here?
K thinks:whATS Happening btw garv & kashish?why r they alone here?
G:kashish was very upset after fighting with sujal.i was comforting her.plz 4giv her sujal
Kashish is weeping. S:if I'm still angry with her,I wud'nt hav cum here
Kash smiles & runs 2 his arms.S-K go.
Kumud:we'l go home garv
G-K go.
Simon who was watching this is irritated:my plan did'nt work out?

S-K in the car. S:why did u tell abt our fight 2 garv?
K:he's my best friend.so I thot I've 2 share my feelings with him
S:riendship is gud.but that does'nt mean that u've 2 tell him whats happening in our house.i don't like garv interfering in my life.who is he 2 tell me 2 4giv u?u r my wife & I no what 2 do with u
K is shocked at S's reaction.

G-K in the car. K:what did kashish tell u?
G:she was very upset abt sujal's behaviour.he fights with her 4 nothing.its bcoz of the tensions he has abt his job.so I comforted her
K:2 comfort her this much,she's not a kid
G:kumud..but..
K:how did u meet kashish?u fought with me & kashish fought with sujal.so u both went 2gether 2 the restaurant 2 get rid of us?
G cant belive K's reaction:why r u talking like this?why ur tone is changed?
K:u feel so.nothing like that
G thinks:sumthing is wrong with her

Sujal is going 4 business tour. Kashish:is it necessary 2 go?
S:what nonsense r u asking?this is my job.how can I avoid it?
K is dull:holi is near.u r not there with me.so I was upset.that's it
NS:plz try 2 understand the situation
K:how long can I adjust?like every girl,I also want my husband 2 b with me 4 every celebration of life
S:Husband-wife relation is not only 4 happiness & celebration.but also 2 share worries.this may b a hard situation 4 us.but we've 2 share it & liv
K:kumud is so lucky.garv is there with her always eventho he's a busy celebrity
S:enuf kashish.don't compare with me 2 garv
S goes.K thinks:sujal has changed.always angry

Kashish phones garv:I called u 2 invite u & kumud 4 our holi party
G:but we've another holi party.but don't worry we'l find time 2 cum 4 ur party
K smiles:thanx

Holi party.G-K r playing with colors.G thinks:kashish's holi party
G:cum kumud,we've 2 go 4 another holi party,kashish's
K is dull:how can we go there since our party is going on.i don't want 2 go
G:ok,but I'm going
G runs.K is dull
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
nice fanfic!
i think all the characters r responsible for the split loL!
cant wait for the next part!
cont soon!
i never knew u started another fancfic!
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#28
jasmine dear a very good part... 👏 but u know what i don't like kumud & sujal's character..they doubt their beloved they don't have bharosa on their pyaar..how bad is that... 🤢
frankly speaking sujal is so damn rude to kashish he has no time for her.. 😡 bechari kashish... 😭
last but not the least i want to kick simon jisne saari misunderstandings create ki........ 😡
please garv kumud , sujal kashish ko jaldi se paas lekar aao... 😃
please continue soon...me will be waiting... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
Part-14..Kumud:garv became mood out.I shud go 4 kashish's party

Garv-kashish wish each other:happy holi
G:this is a hili party.all r colorful.but not even 1 color on ur skin?
K is upset:sujalis not there no.that's why.i miss him.he did'nt even call me 2 wish holi
G:in that anger,u also did'nt call him?
K:I tried.but his mobile is always switched off
G:that means he's busy.otherwise he wud've called u.anyways,I wont allow u 2 sit colorless
G takes green color powder & goes bear her. K:no garv
G laughs & puts on her face.K puts on G.kumud who reaches there is shocked 2 see it
G-kash dance 2 the song lets play holi{waqt}
Ku felt unbearable & went back with tears.Ku thinks:whats happening 2 me?I hope what I feel about them is wrong
Simon smiles seeing this:kumudis feeling discomfort.very nice.i'l increase ur discomfort
S puts sleeping pills into bang.S goes near G-kash & offers baang.They drink it.they r really unconscious & both of them sit down.G's head falls on Kash's shoulder.they fall asleep.S videos it & laughs.
sujal phones kash.but since she's unconscious,she is nit hearing her cell ringing.

After sumtime Kash gets up & calls garv:garv,get up
G gets up slowly & realizes that he was sleeping on her shoulder:I'm sorry
K:its ok.we drank too much
G:no,only little.but then also..
K:bang is strong.that's why
K's cell rings.She's happy that its S:hello,sujal..happy holi.how long I waited 4 ur call
S:why did'nt u call me?
K:I'd.but ur cell was switched off
S:no,mine was not switched off.i called u manytimes.but u did'nt pick up the ph
K:sorry sujal.me & garv drank bang & became unconscious
S:what?u drank bang?that's also with angad?this is too much.i called u 2 wish happy holi.but u spoiled my mood
S cuts the ph & switches off.K tries 2 call him.K;again switched off
G:what happened kashish?what did sujal tell?
K bursts into tears:sujal did'nt even bother 2 wish me.he called 2 fight with me
G:fight with u?but why?
K:I dunno
K cries.G:everything wil b alright.don't cry
G hugs & comforts her.simon takes it into video & smiles.

G goes back home.kumud:did u enjoy holi with kashish?
G:ya.again problem btw btw sujal & kashish.i was comforting her
K:why always problems btw them wenver u meet her?
G is speechless. G:what sujal is doing is not right.why cant he try 2 understand kashish's feelings?
K:why r u always blaming sujal?kashish may also b wrong
G:no,I no her very well.i'm very close 2 her
K gets irritated by that sentence.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
gr8 goin jasmine.....n simon....i seriously feel like killin her...i wonder wut happenz ven kumud n sujal get da pix.... 😭

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