SS: Keeping Khushi Thread 2: Part 22 in Th 3

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Fabulous update...loved it...Khushi is underestimating Arnav that he will go away if he knows about the deformity.He would consider this as a blessing in disguise that because of this scars she hasn't thought about love and life till now.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: IPKlover
I just realized that I forgot to mention one point. The peace, calmness and healing effect of your story. It's written in such a manner that every word feels like a feather's touch: soft and soothing. There is no aggression, no yelling and no discomfort of any kind. Even through the story has complications yet you manage to resolve it with such strong characterization and plotting that it actually leaves the readers appeased. That's what makes you different from all the writers out there. That's what makes us stalk your thread day and night. I am not exaggerating but your writing actually calms me down and gives me peace. It's like nirvana! :)
It actually scares me to think what will happen if this story finishes or you stop writing about Arshi. I hope that never happens.

You have put into words exactly how I feel! Soft, gentle, tranquil despite the melancholy, peace and infused with joy, love and longing that doesn't torment, but melds soothingly into the next moment. The effect is breathless anticipation for the next piece of heaven. 😊

Khushi...I thought that might be the case. But she underestimates Arnav's love for her...

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

ohhh 😔 how wel u described her pain... wat he loves her for... n d pain tht she doesnt have it... she isnt perfect for him...according to her...

wel he wil prove u he is perfect for u Khushi...😊

d way he is persuing her... is so so so ful of genuine love...

ahhh God make such men more...!!

n smita i think i am repeating myself.. d way u portray Khushi in this story has made me fan of this story... her strength dignity just surprises me...

i look upto this character... thank u for writing her so...😊

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

My heart seriously goes out to khushi. I can very well understand what it is like to feel unfit for others and unworthy of being loved. Khushi has every right to refuse arnav from a sense of self-preservation but I trust arnav that he will look past the physical beauty and love and make khushi fall herself fall in love with her inner beauty

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arshi21

@arshi21

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Holy mother of god.

This was, unexpected.

Smita, please...you can't stop here. Please no. Please continue..at least one more chapter...please?

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Rupa

@voldemort

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

awesome update...knew she had scars on her body dats the reason y she is covered frm head to toe...

um sooo much of pain...but lovedd arnav wooing her...damn romantic...

hope u create more of such romantic scenes be4 the truth...

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

That's depressing, I knew from the start tat she's having burnt scars, poor Khushi, but Arnav will definately accept her and will also find the best treatment for her!