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Posted: 12 years ago
@Arjun and Arohi's interaction!! They are stark opposite too. Hmm, so Arnav and Khushi will end up near the same location only as I seem to understand from the address given. Interesting!

Just one question: Arnav is going for the engagement to meet who? Why did Anna say it's someone special?
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Posted: 12 years ago
So they r going 2 meet again...😊
Nice update...Bt very short...
Cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nichuss

What will she cure of maa and chachi? She herself needs treatment.


Uff. All men are same. Seeing a beautiful face they fall for her. he he he

Arjun: what did you thought?

Arohi: uh, nuh, nothing.Poor Arohi...first meeting itself she is absent minded


Arohi's POV

Oh teri ! first time I saw someone who didn't fall for me? He is a man or alien ! you will find out soon...



Arshi meeting again...

this ff is so romantic...and intresting...😆




your MONKEYS are so cute...

well three more pages of comments to make me update...the sooner the better...😊

countdown starts and 5 more likes !!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the PM. Loved the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing yar
i just love it
thankz for the PM
Edited by 1920story - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
so ArShi gonna meet again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i need pms.. for ur updates :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
ok

the reason for being sooo late...


the file where I saved it was corrupted how i don't know...

so i have to write it once more cause i don't think i can open them ever...Rusted Relations from chapter one to ten all corrupted...

It's complicated till chapter twenty six corrupted...as well as all the banners that I had made so far was corrupted...

well yesterday night tried to retrieve...

let's see...

but couldn't retrieve anything...and had to write it once more afresh...the parts and chapters that I had not posted...wrote just an hour ago...and posting right now because I don't want to play with your patience...right now posting part 7a will post part 7b soon...

please check the next page
Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
the file where I saved it was corrupted how i don't know...

so i have to write it once more cause i don't think i can open them ever...Rusted Relations from chapter one to ten all corrupted...

It's complicated till chapter twenty six corrupted...as well as all the banners that I had made so far was corrupted...

well yesterday night tried to retrieve...

let's see...


well I am posting chapter 7a now and will post 7b as soon as I complete.
also had to re-write It's complicated. chapter twenty of It's Complicated;Family Tree on page 100

ok

I deleted tiak today from my buddylist.
if you are non-reader please lessen down my work by removing me from your buddylist and yes silent readers please do comment if you don't want me to delete you..
Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



chapter seven:


part A


part B will be posted soon...



Arnav thought "So it is nearby only. Good."

His meeting ended around 4 p.m. quite late than he expected. Well he remembered after that. The invitation. He drove the car. It was just two furlongs away. He parked the car. He went inside. He couldn't see any of them from his family. Suddenly a middle aged woman gave him a basket of flowers and asked him to give it to some titaliya.

" hai re nandkishore, yeh titaliya ko dei kea o bitwa"

"oh nandkishore,please deliver this to titaliya"

Arnav understood he was mistaken for somebody else.

He went inside to find Titaliya.

Annu: bhai what are you doing with a basket of flowers?

Arnav: who. Actually a woman gave me this and asked to deliver to some tit tita

Annu: bhai. Stop it. What are you saying.

Arnav: I didn't intend to speak nonsense, her name is like that. Yeah, titaliya.

Annu: give that to me. You go.

Arnav handed it to her and was about to go.

Annu: bhai..bhai...

Arnav: now what?

Annu: I told you something in the phone. Special.

Arnav: so is he here?

Annu: yeah. He is there beside the fountain. Talking to di.

Arnav: di knows it?

Annu: nooo.. are you crazy, that I will tell her. You just see me and tell whether he is fit for me or not. Ok?

Arnav: ok. Done.

So guys what do you think?? Who is the special person??? Whom does Aradhana wants ASR to meet?

Where as Anjali was talking to someone near the fountain.

Anjali and Rahul were friends in college.

Rahul loved Anjali.

He didn't confess his feelings when he saw that Anjali loves Shyam.

His love was true so he decided to be happy with her happiness.

He joined his father's business after completing his studies and now a sudden meet with Anjali.

Rahul: Anjali..

Anjali: Rahul. After such a long time.

Rahul: glad to meet you too.

Anjali: hey, from when have you been formal?

Rahul: I had to be else Shyam will think.

Anjali: Shyam is no more.

Rahul: what?? He died? How? When? Why didn't you tell me?

Anjali: he is alive and somewhere in jail.

Rahul: what? Why?

Anjali: he was a fraud. He tried to cheat on our family's business and he was already in a relationship with some woman called Lavanya.

Rahul looked at her with a jolt. What was the name? "Lavanya?" his ex-fiancee? Was he hearing right?

Rahul: what was the girl's name?

Anjali: Lavanya. At least I will tell my chotte is better. At least he gave that poor girl a job in his firm. Shyam was evil.

Anjali kept on cursing Shyam.

Where as Rahul flew back his mind some 5 years ago.

So that man was Shyam for whom she left. No it was Arnav. Anjali's brother. But did he know that he was between me and Lavanya? But, wait. Shyam was in a relation with Lavanya. May be Anjali's bro doesn't know about Lavanya. The day he comes to know her true colours he will throw her out.

I still remember what she said to me that day, pulling off my ring and saying "I had got a better offer Rahul. I dream big and aspire to be a supermodel. You middle class fellow what will you give me? Name-fame-money? No. a few sarees and some howling kids. I don't want someone like you. small thoughts. Small wishes. I want to reach at the top! Top! Top! I am not born to be a bloody housewife"

"no Lavanya you can't do this to me. I love you. the first time I loved she loved someone else and now the second time again you are hurting me by leaving me alone."

"do whatever you can. You bloody fool. Relations have no value in this modern world. Those are old crap. Money is everything. Money is what brings you happiness and not mere love. Love doesn't fill your stomach, food does and it's worth for money. Stop being philosophic and step into reality. Good bye, for ever. One day will come when you will see me and cry, that why didn't I listen to her"

"no Lavanya. I am not cursing you, but someday really I might have to cry not for where will you be but what you have been through. To reach the top you need to do hard work and not go by unfair means. If you do so, one day you have to come back to rectify your faults and believe me it will be too late. Today you don't realise but one day will come when you will realise that Relations are only true and nothing else."

Rahul..Rahul..what happened? What are you thinking?

Rahul: nothing Anjali. Nothing.

Anjali: don't hide it from me. Please tell the truth. What happened?

Rahul: about you and our college days.

Anjali: yeah. I love my college days. Remember? Our basketball matches. I just loved them.

Rahul: if you don't mind may I ask you something?

Anjali: yeah, sure.

Rahul: are you single?

Anjali: yeah. Why will you find a groom for me?

Rahul: no, just like that.

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago

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