Kalarikkal House [4] - Thread 5 link posted - Page 47

Damn this made me emotional! Loved his pov! My respect for him grew!

Was that the perspective of the house? Very interesting!!

you are brilliant... what an exciting chapter.. you couldnt have expressed it better...

the illam... its memories filled with centuries of emotions... beautiful... so much sadness in the thought... so much regret... so conscious of its inhabitants and their psyche..

this little atom bomb of a chapter sums the entire story... well done.. fabulous...

Originally posted by: Onlooker

Devi,

I read through all the comments, readers are divided as to whose thoughts were portrayed?! Was it KH's, Mr. Namboodiri's or both intermingled!! Am confused even on 5th read..because all options seems right!! What the hell..Is confusion ka kya naam doon?..please Devi iss confusion ko door karo...

PS: But the little birdie in my head says it is KH's soul which spoke!!

Oh my God Devi!What a fascinating chapter!Had to read it many times to fully take in what all was written.And as i said in one of my earlier comments during d course of this story dat KH is not an inanimate object but d biggest character in this story...n today we could feel dat so vividly when KH's thoughts came to us through Khushi's father's thoughts.So just like any other father,he also wants Khushi to be happy n carefree n thus is taking such a strong step of evicting her.

Originally posted by: Polkadots78

According to me it is KH and KH's point of view. KH is also talking about the father's point of view...the 'he' in this update is KH referring to the the father and not namboothri referring to himself...Devi, pls correct me if I am wrong...

No, you're quite right.

-Devi

wow! that was brilliant - the house always was a character, a force to reckon with in this story and now you just brought it to life. by making it an active, thinking character.

The house, we heard it's thoughts. wow i have never read anything that has attempted something like that. But i haven't read any FF that is orientated around a house, it's ghosts, it's history, it's magic and it's curses.

It was interesting to see the house as a being that listens and understands its inhabitants. It was made even more effective by the house being personified rather than mythological with how it can't show the future but only the past like even the best of human beings having their drawbacks. It brings Kalarikkal house down to Earth.

Wow, so deep and intense! *sigh* ... That house really is wise! Ok, this is really weird, but after re-reading the chapter, I was suddenly reminded of Dumbledore! Both wise, soulful, great observers, and hold a bunch of secrets!! :-P

Yay i am glad you are updating...any chance of lavender being updated?? I miss that story!

Anyway...i hope the dads plan works. in the previous chapter i was angry at him but now have more understanding of bit motives.