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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

what to say i don't know...

amazing os...😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Oh My God diii This OS was so HOT!!! When I saw the title I expected some Holi related OS LOL😆But this is toh..My God❤️ No words! Ur so good at writing on SwaRon and u write such hot stuff with so easy. No way did I cringe at any word. There was no crudeness, everything was so beautiful😊Loved it

Thanks for telling me about it.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Till Death Do Us Apart was really sad. I was crying knowing that both Swayam and Sharon died. Of course one died in love, but still. But I really liked the way u unfolded the backstory. It was really beautiful. The wedding ceremony, their romantic moments, the birth of their children and Swayam's lover boy antics even after having children😆 Very cute. But it was really sad that Swayam died too😭 One thing I didnt get, why was Sharon dying? I read it but I dont know if i missed that part or what? Please tell

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Neeti96
Till Death Do Us Apart was really sad. I was crying knowing that both Swayam and Sharon died. Of course one died in love, but still. But I really liked the way u unfolded the backstory. It was really beautiful. The wedding ceremony, their romantic moments, the birth of their children and Swayam's lover boy antics even after having children😆 Very cute. But it was really sad that Swayam died too😭 One thing I didnt get, why was Sharon dying? I read it but I dont know if i missed that part or what? Please tell

Sharon died because of old age and illness 😆

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Payal

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

I am unreserving. Shocked na?

Smarty I typed a huge comment but udd gaya pura

Now I forgot wad i wrote n m lazy

Anyway coming to the os, the only song i was thinking bout while reading it was Neeyat Kharab hain 😆😆

Painter Swayam was really a unique idea.

ANd Sharon's attempts to seduce him were so cutee

Aisa os likha hain yaha pe bache bigad jayenge but who cares :P

The flow throughtout was so good, never did u lose grip on this os. Plus their color se holi khelna wala scene...awww

But undoubtedly the best was the shower scene. water dripping down his body..uff..I wonder how it dint get converted into steam given his hotness :P

I get real dirty at tyms, I know...

This is chhotu I know but sumthin better than nothing na..

N Dis was d bestest bday gift ever..love u so much smarty 😳

Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Sharon died because of old age and illness 😆

LOL!

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

It was hawt stuff swayam and sharons bathroom moments swayam bare chested and sharon trying hard to resist him.. Very nicely written os really liked it..:)