Deep Thoughts:My Writing Index..New OS link PG-41 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago

Just loved d os..u r d most amazing writer..👏

D os which was really hawt had d essence of purity in it..it showed d purity of love of swaron..

D dopplegangers were funny and added to the os's charm..

Loved how first sharon then swayam tried to seduce the other and ultimately bth couldnt just resist each other..

The ending lines were amazing..

I guess i have bored u enough with my comment but lastly I simply love ur writing style..plz continue to write more and pm me whenever u do so..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Di os from you after a long time..:)
Aww it was soo romantic and sweet os
Ahh now sharon learned a lesson-to always disturb swayam when he's working or painting😆.
Loved the os
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Posted: 12 years ago
😳


thats all i can express...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful os... I loved every bit of dis os
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited comment on page 27..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.. loved it a lot.. seductively romantic very sensuous os.. loved it.. swayam gifting her her painting for her b'day n trying hard to concentrate on it but sharon s irritated to sit continuously in a single place n starts seducing him to make their weekend romantic which was d main reason for them to come out but swayam s painting her portrait.. loved d doppelganger section but even they cant handle hot swayam who s now making sharon al weak... loved d awesome romance part.. they were al sensuous awesome part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved d update..
Romantic swaron..😳
Sharon's dopplegangers part was funny😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome...😃

majnu is a kalakar ... 😉

painting his desperate housewife on canvas...😃

too bad for the artist,,

that his swtheart is so sexy...😛

n seducing him at wrong time 😆

rofl .. usse hi cartoon bana dia.. 🤪

its like-- hitting axe on ur own foot...

hehehe... dress giring... turn on for him ... 😉

shower me romance... its sexy... ☺️

his touch can mild the siren... 😊

even wen her 2 states of mind are cat-fighting..😆

sharon ye painting kabhi nhi pure hone degi... 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago
dekho dekho!!! kitne saare sexy, sensuous, hot, seducing comments aaye hai!!! dekho dekho!! ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

aur kuch ne to sirf sharm se sirf blush kiya hai!!! bechare kuch bol bhi nahi paye!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWosm OS Dipsss lovei t
n Update bhi do yaar

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