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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Awesome and amazing OS buddy.

Loved it and thanks for the PM.

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

simply awesome..as always.. 😊

sorry for late comment...was busy with examz..so could not comment..

ur superb writer..plz cont dis way.. 😊

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

this os is amazing.. i love ur writting style it is different and completly awesome. .. i am simply speechless after reading this os.. hats off seriously... thanks for the pm...

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

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I really don't have words to describe that how much I loved this OS.

Oh my God Swaron tou pehle hee buhut passionate lovers thay...You just made them wild in each others love...

Your every writing is just out of this world..

Now this OS is not gonna leave my mind for many days...😳😉

Thanks 4 writing this much beautiful things for our favorite couple..

SWARON ALWAYS

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

kaffi lamba comment tha...

But this writing of urz deserved it..

Oh clapping karna tou bhool hee gai...👏

Chalo ab main chalti hoon...Thanks 4 d pm.

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Rabina

@raveena2807

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Reading about 'happy-happy', 'so much in love', 'can't resist each other' and a bit 'naughty-naughty' Swaron is always a treat. Your writing is like an icing on the cake. kept me totally engrossed throughout. not to mention that silly grin I had on my face all the time. Do write more often, Deepika! Can't have enough of your writing...

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Wantubak

@Wantubak

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Superb OS poor swayam😆😆😆

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Its heavenly beutifull one shot with heavenly beautifull couple SWARON...Brilliant concept.. and different one also..Just like always...i just loved it...So,now as the story...

First and most of all..i love the concept of romentic weekend of swaron...Swayam bhai was enjoying in his painting..and there sharon was hell irrited just becoz swayam not giving her attention..just busy in his sharon's painting...Truly..i love this track.."kaas ye D3 me dekhne ko milta"...

After sharon irrited..just Loved the total scene...She was angry on him..but his loverboy,loving husband wali innocence making her difficult to angry on him...Then the whole baathroom scene was great romentic..hot..Swaron under a shower...Swayam was bare chested and sharon trying hard to resist him...

Sharon doppleganger scene was amazing to read...Then swayam choices to sharon was awesome..

You have only two options...YES or YES...take it as a punishment for disturbing me in my painting...he said..winking at her...

That was one of the most beautifull punishment to sharon by swayam..
Shower moments was just hottt...tt..and the explanation of words and frames of dialouges was mindblowing as always...

And last..loved the ending part..Swaron was busy in their lovaable weekend night adventures...Finally their dream weekend had begun...And i really like this ending line..

The moon left them alone ...trying to give the madly in love couple some privacy...his eyes fall on the incomplete painting..he sighed ...he knew...the poor thing will never get their attention back...

So,in one and total..it was amazing one shot.. totally i just loved it...u are great writer..u'r explanation is just wow..Keep it up.. and keep updating

sorry for late comment...

Thanx for PM

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago