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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Amazing os!!
Beautifully written..❤️
Everything was just so perfectly described..:)
The emotions,the wedding wows,Sharon's fear..deir baby's first step...
Everything was described beautifully!!
Luvd it!!❤️

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

fabulous os👏👏

looovvveeddd ittt😃😃

beautifully written👍🏼

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Deepu it was superb update

swayam reminded his whole journey of life with his love, his life, his siren sharon
u reminded me, magical confession of swaron where from their heart thy know thy belong to each other

nd swaron marriage was superb
where both of them lost in each other
swayam who want to see his angel happy nd sharon who want to give all her love to him nd then swayam promise to her was amazing
swaron kiss was magical where thy forget abt their surrounding
then swaron morning romance where swayam pouring all his love on her nd sharon guilty to him in college
bt swayam didn't gave chance to make her guilty

sharon happiest moment when tanya try to take her first step which depicts her motherhood
then being naughty swayam with sharon nd their kids n swaron eye talk

sharon on her dead bed n swayam went upto her
sharon know that she wil die any moment nd sharon want him to be happy
bt swayam didn't want to listen her n he want sharon wil be with him
bt finally she take her last breath nd swayam don't want break his promise so he also take his last breath in embrace of his love

end was superb by rey dialogue
why they responsible to seprate them when destiny unable to seprate them nd their love was eternal for them

love it

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Deeps u made me cry...and imagine I was in office when i read it...that really became awkward, but I wouldnt want it any other way for Swaron's sake...this was an ode to love - as there can b one...if there is perfection in a relationship it has to b this...sumthing that has to b kept on a pedestal...to good to b true - but then thats what SwaRon r, isnt it

U wrote like u were inspired yaar, and even in the normal course u r impeccable, toh this toh was like sone pe suhaaga or the cherry on the cake - awsomely, mindblowingly, romantically, passionately, touching the chords of the heart and in fact all the senses!!!

I dont think I hav written this much in comments for anyone ever, ab isse zyaada main kyaa bolun...

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

very very very very very very very very long os 😊😊s

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

OMG I cried cried cried😭..thank God I wasnt in office else people would have thought someone had died 😆

Everything was so perfect! from wedding till death ..it is a happy ending atleast I consider it as happy ending , when one couple end up haveing a beutiful journey together , but God knows why I cried..

Their jorney made me cry !

Beautifully written ...Loved it to the core

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swapna

@shan16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

It was not something about which I can pen down just like that.

This was something which can be only felt

mindblowing ...un believable ...so intense ...painfully sweet ...heart aching but still felt joy n was happy reading it... i cried reading this journey of love ...different phase of swaron life but der was a smile on ma face...THIS IS CALLED "AN UNCONDITIONAL LOVE" .which never dies...

seriously m speech less ...to say more...m lack of wrds...

hatsofff to u...

muaaah...a BIG BIG hug...best OS ever... master piece,...

love u for this sweetheart...

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Wantubak

@Wantubak

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

res till full reading... Done

finlayyy 😆😆😆 m read it kuch jayada hi long hai..😆😆

puri D3 hi ek baar mein review m know ki swarON k Shaddi nhi hui par kya fark padhta hai 😆😆

AWosm os

Keep it up dips👍🏼

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

super duper long...😲

but it was worth reading... kya likha h dips 🤗

i was wondering ... where r u...????

may be u were superbusy in writing this...😆

it was really sweet... nothing complex... just some lovely moments of swaron's life...😊

their christian style wedding... their feelings for each other... winning of love...😃

she was tensed on his reaction n behavior over her pregnancy..... so cute 😛

inke kids ke to naam bhi predecided h... 😆

their life seemed so perfect... but life comes with an expiry date...😳

still they defeated death by joining hands... if one is bound to die... another will come bydefault...👏

thats true love... together forever...

well done swtheart ... 😎

one more thing-- neend toh nhi aayi...but u definitely made me cry at the end...😭

yup...divide karti to flow toot jata... i was smiling wide reading it... 😃

Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Hye.. Ur jst an awsome writter... The way you write emotions they are going through is jst amazing.. I have read almost every piece of work of urs i guess... Wese to everthing in your works is perfect, be that font style, colour, font size and presentation, everything is just amazing, but one thing i love most is how you descibe their state of mind.. Kudos 👏 Loved this OS. . Loved the way u showed their whole journey, with flashbacks.. Perfect.. Don't know right words to praise ur work... And one more thing, please update PEN FRIENDS only if u can...

Thanku...!! And please ignore spelling errors and grammatical errors cause commenting from mobile..!!