Deep Thoughts:My Writing Index..New OS link PG-41 - Page 12

Firstly Deepy i dunno if i will be able to comment properly in it. Believe i cried like literally cried and almost after reading this i was feeling a weight on my chest area which was not bad think, it was that beautiful pain i felt from this beautiful journey who names OS.. I think it was last time i felt in you Love you forever's update, i dunno the number of the chapter but i remember i did felt this pain that time too and i literally cried that time too and I dunno i feel this kinda pain when i see Swaron old or dieing, it's not the bad thing kinda pain it's beautiful once and make me thing always that there is a person inside me who is so so so damn much attached to Swaron and made me think that there are some more other just like me who have nerve to write such a emotional thing because i don't have..i am not strong enough like you baby!! Seems like this comment is coming out of my heart directly, feel that you are not reading a comment but my heart right now!

Whenever i want to cherish my time and feel good or deep, i know there are some people who can make me feel like this and mind me you are the first name which comes to my mind, i can swear on god! When you pm'ed me the little part of this OS, i asked you tell me deepy if the story is sad because i am very emotional and i can not read as such thing now and you said it's a love story and love is never sad..i were absolutely right, love can never be sad as love is the most beautiful feeling in entire world... and believe me i love you..i always respected you not like i used to call you behen or Di but only my heart knew how much i do respect but from now i dunno if me myself will be able to handle the respect and love i have gathered in my heart reading this OS from you!! I know you will think that how can a person earn a respect or love from thinks just like this but it can happen!! An emotion in word which shows the inner you whether its an emotion for any fan fictions or human being even a little talks and deed can express someone heart and i love you a lot!! Hats off to you for giving us Swaron with some new un-dieing meaning.. You literally made Swaron a true forever love story like heer ranjha, romeo juliet, sohni mahiwal and lot.. they were there for me as i loved them..but you made me think that there is someone really like Swaron in world because one place or other there is your feeling and emotion who creates exact the same structures and i am pleased too and proud to say that i know a girl call name Deepika who knows how to melt hearts, to to make other cry with joy, how to make one love something, how love anything and how to love even some fan fiction and what not!! 

I dunno if you will chuckle on my stupid love for you and and Swaron after knowing i much i missed this Deepu and am i crying like some stupid jerk writing this!! Believe me i am and i like telling you when i cry because if you, may be because i thinks that convey's how much i love you!!



Well, itna sab bol dia hai buta abhi bhi bohat bolna reh gaya hai about Swaron and OS! :D

Swaron are really some magic, some other different world then can only be apart till death do them and nothing!! 😭

Swayam being old, have cherished his whole life with his life , his oxygen, his heart, his deep ocean eyes, his breaths, his soul, his feelings, his love, his passion, his dream, his world Sharon..like a true happy lover who loves and want nothing more then his love re-calling that every drop they collected together and made a love sea from that..

The words, his emotions, his feeling, how beautiful it must be for him to think and to re-call those memories with her world called Siren!

He being in the heaven, their home which was converted into home after her arrival, her mere presence and her love and care made the building into house and their lives into beautiful petals dipped into fresh pure water and their world into heaven or may be more beautiful then heaven.

How Swayam was still cherishing each and every small memory of both of them sitting in their heaven.. feeling her mere presence, her love, her beauty, everything was there and he who was a mere part or rather whole of her could sense, could feel.. could cherish it there too..


 
Swayam feeling so happy because today his love Sharon will be all his for forever..till eternity...till death apart them.. how happily he was dressing himself in front of mirror..want to look at his best to match a diamond which will be attached to his soul in a while.. how his friend being the best human being in world in by his side and smiling at him..

Swayam waiting for his love impatiently, his love..unki becheni.. uska pyaar everything was beautiful.. to have her in his embrace for lifetime and to never let go off her was pure..

Seeing his angel taking step one by one towards him.. reducing the ruthless distance between them.. to be for him.. to be his.. to be his soulmate.. and to be hisp proud wife..

Her beauty, her innocence.. her soul is a mere mirror and he can see how happy she was..

They tagged one but even they were one before that too.. their hearts were one but for world.. for beign close to each other.. they were husband wife.. the most beautiful relation created by God..

My favorite lines in this scene was..

I am grateful to the Creator that LOVE found me ... wrapped me in its arms ...and it is making me complete today...

She replied ...lost in his eyes...she was under his magical spell...the world around her was blurred ..all she could see was HIM...beside her '.holding her hands in his..her small hands fitted perfectly into his big ones..as if they were designed to be together..destined to be together..

He kissed her hands again and continued...

I love you from the day I know you..loving you natural to me just like inhaling life...your mind stirs my soul to new height ...your faith gives me strength...your touch delights me...without your love..i am incomplete...

Between us we found the echo of LOVE...love..that has filled the universe since the dawn of creation...that LOVE will enlighten our lives...my heart will continue loving you till my last breath...

She smiled in response to his words...his magical words...

I bind myself with you with these wedding vows,...with all my heart and soul...willingly and wholeheartedly..without any doubts or mental reservations...

In riches and in poverty ...in jubilation and in despair..in sickness and in health...despite of our flaws..I will share my life with you...

All that is mine is yours...With love I will tell you the truth as I understand it..I will honor and respect you..I will rejoice in your joys and weep in your sorrows...I will love and cherish you...without cease and without pause '

I promise to cherish and respect you, to care and protect you, to comfort and encourage you, and stay with you, for all eternity '..till death do us apart ..

Their first kiss conveyed their inner feelings..their love that how they forgot about the outter world and got deep down into each other..not caring for the people around them but how cute that was when they broke apart from kiss realizing there are people who are watching them and how the priest smiled them..true very true..pure love doesn't have to be shown or said,.. one can feel it like the priest did.. and smiled at them..



How the girl, Sharon was crying in front him telling her love how much she cares of him.. how much she loves him.. how she was feeling the pain to push him away from her..

She was cared to lose him..to even think that what if he doesn't love her anymore.. but that stupid girl didn't knew that it was she who was living in his heart from lifetime and will be there till death do them apart.. How they were destined together at that moment..



Chun chun chum.. the melody which he could recognize even on being long distance like earth and sky..

Loved this part how Sharon was trying to wake up her sleepy head nut case Swayam..

There together last night was hiden yet beautifully showcased in the scene.. how he was teasing her and how she was blushing re-calling those most memorable actions and memories of last night.. how she was blushing because of her..

When ever Sharon blush i get some beautiful ticklish feeling inside me as i know blush in one of those things which shows immense love for there better halves..

How he kissed her and she being helpess for those 5 precious years in which she just pushed him away but he never stopped loving her.. How he touched her and how he consoled her.. [Naughty Deepy ki bacchi, yeh romantic scene tumne U, Me back to US ke chapter 5(a) OR 5(b) se lia hai, new nahi likh sakhti thi aunty! Dekh liya main tujhse kitna pyaar karti hoon ke tera itna old scene bhi mujhe ab tak yaad hai!! 🤗]

Half unresed from here!! 🤗

He kept his finger on her lips...firmly '.he got his answer ...he could understand what she didn't say...their sign of love was taking breaths inside her...which was making her feel so many emotions at the same time..her fears..her insecurities...he could read her like a open book...it was his responsibility to make her feel special ...to make her feel loved each and every moment..

I will love you when your belly will increase in size...i will caress and kiss it every moment as you will be carrying our sign of love..our DREAM inside you...i will fulfill all your wishes '.with a smile ...after all your wish is my command...

He chuckled ...she smiled through her tears...he took her into his embrace and caressed her hairs..

I will hold your hairs falling on your face ...and caress you back when you will face morning sickness...I will love you always despite the fact how do you look...as I don't love your physical appearance ..I love the beautiful heart you possess...the pure soul you own...

He went on his knees and placed his palm on her belly...and said..

Hey baby...its me..your daddy..come soon..me and your momma are waiting for you...

And he kissed her belly '. dried out tears started flowing from her eyes again..but this time they were tears of joy...the joy of motherhood..tears of hope..hope of a new dawn in their lives...

How much he was happy to have her and their sign of love together in his life, the sign who will complete them.. their love.. their world.. their souls.. their heart.. their string for forever..

How adorable father will he be..how he said hey baby..i am your daddy... i am sure the baby inside must have hi - fived with him that moment..they were misty eyes.. because of joy..because there world was completing..

I loved this scenes like OMG, even i added this kinda scene in my chains of love SS.. i dunno why i love when Tanya takes first step and Swaron runs for her and hold her and how much they must be feeling proud and complete..and how much glad they will be as the sign of love who were created by them, who were inside of her.. who they cherished inside them for 9 months, who was in their arms..who smiled for them.. who laughed with them.. who played with them.. who was everything for them..and will always be was big enough to take her first step towards them.. how beautiful that feeling...that emotion.. that memory would be for both of them..

How Sharon being proud called Swayam and asked him to take the camera to capture this memorable moment for them to be cherish till death aparts them..

How being extra- excited father Swayam came running and watched Sharon face glowing with love and happiness for their little one and how proud was she to have a little angel in her embrace.. he took some pictures and then kept camera on auto mode to complete the ever loving beautiful family of them..

God, i loved this cute and romantic scene.. how Swayam was so cute and romantic towards Sharon in front of their kiddies.. and how their kids were enjoying the moment between their parents too. how adorable kids they were too..

How he said my heart will always be young and hi-fived with tanay..

This scene was awe so adorble and beautiful.. how swayam said thankyou jaan to Sharon for giving him such beautiful and complete family..

I literally placed my palm on my heart when i read this pehle nasha tune thing in the scene, that his ring tone was pehla nasha and you won't believe that at the same time i was listening the same song.. yes i was listening pehle nasha only..

i literally felt a knot tieing in my heart.. and this was the time or rather a scene from which the happy tears went off and sad and emotional and i dunno of blah blah blah came running.. It was the scene which took my heart to the fullest though it was the smallest scene in all but the impact was the strongest one i believe..

Pehla nasha kitni piyari piyari yaadein juri hai na iss song ke saath.. swaron ke saatth.. har OS, SS, FF ..har swaron ke scene ke saath.. TanHa.. our inspirations unke saath.. now vrushaan ke satth.. pehla nasha was always my favorite even before D3 started and now this song has some different depth in my heart.. whenever i listen to this song i feel happy..i re-call swaron..tanha wala.. but at the same time now i re-call vrushan too.. but the most different hing is that i realize what will happen when D3 will end.. for forever.. i know it will remain live in our hearts.. but still.. what after then.. i never get my answer and i at that time i listen to this song more and more and remember Tanha wala Swaron and cherish Vruhsan wala Swaron and i feel little relax.. my hands shake when i think of D3 ending literally.. I get scared always..

This is the impact of this Pehla Pehla on us..

Sorry Deepy i dunno agar mein iss last scene pe sahi se comment bhi kar paungi..because i read this scene 3 times and all the times i had tears in my eyes.. felt like it was not Sharon who was going away from Swayam or Sharon was has to leave alone Swayam.. it was Swaron who was breaking and with them i was too.. i know it'' very silly to be this much attached to fanfictions but i can't help.. as i have my own swaron world in my heart..

Swayam entering in ward and seeing his world leaving him, his souls snatched away from his by this cruel and ruthless destiny, his love, his breath, his heart, live, his everything was going away from him in few minutes but he being helpless could do nothing but just wait and see her going away from him for forever..as death was parting them..

Sharon on the other hand.. was empty.. she didn't wanted to be apart from her soul, from her heart from her Swayam.. she wanted to be in his heart.. in his embrace for never ending time.. but she knew it was time.. time to end.. time go .. time to be apart.. from life.. from love.. from love.. from everything because her everything was only and only her Swayam.. she was looking in his eyes to feel him for more time to capture his image till her last breath and he was doing same to capture her in his frame till hi will live in this alone world after her..

But his true love could not handle this.. he could not let her go ..never.. he was gone with her to their new world.. to be with each other where is no ending limits of breaths.. of time.. of love.. their will be only them.. for ever and ever.. so death can not apart them.. never ever..

Tanay gave the last greeting to his parents and placed the fire in front of their lifeless bodies..they had kept both the bodies together ...as Rey said...

"Who are we to separate them ..when even the destiny lost in front of their love..."

Two souls stood far away from the crowd ...their fingers intertwined with each other ...they had won this togetherness after a battle with destiny..

She kept her head on his shoulder ...he encircled his hand around her waist...

So together forever?...she questioned..

Together Forever...Forever ...even death can't make us apart...

He placed his lips on her forehead...and took her into his embrace...it was home coming for her...

Two souls drowned in the ocean of love...remained in each others embrace ...for eternity ...

If i would have commented on this scene in anyway that would be a insult to this beautiful scene.. they were together.. forever and ever.. no limits.. no ending for them now.. only both of them in their world.. world of love!

I love you Deepy a lot.. alot ... alot.. tunai pagal dekhen honge but mere jesi pagal nahi dekhi hogi!!

Thanks for giving us the new meaning of divine love and diving Swaron!

Lots of Love to you!! Please come back properly on IF and start updating your works, i beg this time.. seriously i am missing my deepy a lot!! Don't make me sad deepu! 😊