Deep Thoughts:My Writing Index..New OS link PG-41 - Page 13

Originally posted by: megsy

WHERE IS MY RESERVED PLACE????

send me ur comment di...place is der😳

Deepi...u r fab...🤗

*unres

Hey deeps...🤗
Yet another beautiful os...I dunno I might fall short of words which might end up in a short comment...please bear with me on that...😕

It is said nah that "we come alone,and we go alone, that's life"...but here two souls deeply in love...has challenged fate, has challenged life...even death couldn't tear them apart...what a beautiful thought...😊

I found this os as a saga of swaron's love...each stage passes, but still their love remained intact...it was always at the peak...😳
Starting from the time of their wedding...Sharon in white gown, looking angelic and swayam in his suite with his signature smile...everything seems so picturesque..otherwise also church weddings are so blissful...and swaron as the couple, adds more charm to it...:)
and yeah not to forget swayam's dialogues here...they are very catchy...

"I love you from the day I know you..loving you is natural to me just like inhaling life...your mind stirs my soul to new height ...your faith gives me strength...your touch delights me...without your love..i am incomplete..."😳

Then comes the confession scene...aww how i loved swaron's dialogues...it was one of the epic scenes...and i still remember their each and every gesture as if i saw it very recently...
u just made me to brush up all those fond memories again...😳

Sharon trying to wake swayam and his cute tactics to make her blush...everything was a treat to read...:)
The day when sharon told that a part of their love was growing within her...I can imagine swayam's reaction towards it...how complete he might have felt...and his lines...

"I will love you when your belly will increase in size...i will caress and kiss it every moment as you will be carrying our sign of love..our DREAM inside you...i will fulfill all your wishes ….with a smile...after all your wish is my command..."

The time when their baby took her first steps...one of the most cherished moments ever...
and also their cute family convo near the dining table...a picture perfect family...😳
And then comes the time for departure... what i loved was even at this stage, swayam and sharon are still crazy about each other like a newly wedded couple...their love is still so pure and eternal...
that even destiny had to bow down in front of them...:)

I loved Rey's comment at the end...

"Who are we to separate them ..when even the destiny lost in front of their love..." 👍🏼

All in all i really loved it...and the ending i really liked it when swayam died alongwith sharon...as noone is left alone...😛

I dunno how did i even manage to write this much...u always make it difficult for me to express my feelings deeps...*pouts*

do write more...😳

awesome os... loved it

i wanted to leave a huge comment but i am literally *speechless* *applauding* this was brilliant and awesome and fantastic and marvellous and beautifyl and superb and stupendous and fantabulous and *looking for a dictionary* cant find enough words the ending inspired by the notebook was perfect you did perfect justice to the title of the os and swaron *salute* love ya girl hope u keep writing

dat was FLAWLESS..

Reserved, will edit after my exams in March! :D

Superb os n soo dreamy...though end was a copy of notebook(movie) or barfi bt chalta hai ;):D ... Bt the way u wrote lyk present den flasback its awsummm... Hats off 2u... Deep can u write a funny os on D3???if yes den do tell me i ve a concept 4u... :)

res 😭

unres
all time after reading ur os/ss/ff di.
I want to be in love just once.
Yeah i know it's my idioticy.
Bt still i want to go through all this.
Ummm all through means i don'twant to go hurt.
Bcoz get hurt in love is so much painfull.
Ye bhe mughe apke upd8 pdh ke lgta h.

Apko pta h itna affacted to mai dmg dekh ke ni hote hun.
Jitna apka upd8 pdhne ke bd hote hun.

Ummm i think now enough of my thought.
Back to os
this os was in my thought one of the bst story written by anybody on forum.
Ummm i so so so much loue this os.
I can't find word to compliment u.
For this one.
U again left me spechless by ur writing.

In simply it was awesme.