ARHI FF: MasterClass: Part 59 new thread - Page 72

Originally posted by: S003

I really am so frustrated with you... I mean please ... can you try and make a chapther 10/10 instead of the 11/10 that you deliver...

lol - you made me laugh with your comment hun!!

though I'm glad that you are enjoying the story 😆

Please and thank you...

OH GOD (or Naina) MAKE her say yes!!!!

a private ceremony will be so in character!!!

Originally posted by: CDlove

eeekkks!! Gosh!! I loved this update :)

Ahhh I want a man like Arnav...damn...you seem to have materialised and written about my ideal man...sigh...how do you do it?

working on a secret formula with a mad phyics and biological sciences professor... who knows we might just be able to manufacture a man like this😆

Im so envious of Khuhsi... 😆

Originally posted by: peepli

Naina, you do spring surprises at the most unexpected times.. I read the whole chapter, but the only thing I can remember of it is the last few lines, getting married in kashmir tomorrow..is there anything I can bribe you with to make khushi accept it???lol..
btw are you a foodie?? You seem to know everything about all cuisines..

Originally posted by: SS88

I love this FF, I ve been a silent reader so far. But I just HAD to comment today. excellent work 😊

Originally posted by: mitzi11

Originally posted by: Ethereal-Path

Naina! Naina! Naina!

What do I say right now? You know its quite funny that every time you update, I feel like writing so much in the comment but then I realize that with every update, you outdo yourself and that leaves me completely speechless. As I start to write something in the comment, am all clueless.

Mere words cannot express how beautiful this story is. It's all together a wonderful novel in the making! I can see all a mix of Harlequins, M&B et al in this one fic. Needless to say that the couple being ArHi here is a cherry on cake!

Right from the beginning to this 56th chapter, there hasn't been a loose end. Every update has left me wanting for more. And now, its getting too much to handle -_-

You're a brilliant writer. This story screams this fact throughout. Arnav, here, is to-die-for man and Khushi, well, she is exactly how I love woman to be - strong, independent, compassionate and self respecting. ArHi's relationship is amazing (I cant get tired of saying this!) The way he's there for her in all roles is endearing. From mentor to lover to fiance and soon-to-be husband, Arnav is a dream guy. What a girl won't do to get this Arnav - a heart stealer!

Hi Daling, first thank you for your comments. I cant tell you just how big the smile on my face is right now!!

To be honest, as fullfilling as the writing process is... its just as challenging as I try to balance the story while staying true to the characters and the storyline with each update. I guess my focus has always been the exploration of the growth of their characters as they navigate this absolutely uncharactered territory.

Secondly, I've never wanted their inherrent characteristics to change just because they are in a relationship. Arnav is just as stubborn, driven and hotheaded as he was in the beginning - only difference being that now he had found a different way to express his emtion i.e talk to Khushi and not yell at her!! He's an intelligent man, always has been. The problem with him initially was that he worked on the 'its my way or the high way' approach to life...thankfully he's learnt quickly that this strategy wont work in his relationship.

Coming to this update, every bit was lovely. Started from Arnav to ASR and then back Arnav, this guy (or rather you) is full of surprises. The last few lines left me breathless. Such a dream! Beautiful one at that!

I seriously don't mind whatever Khushi's reaction will be but just popping this question is something akin to bliss. I would love if this happens. Prince sweeping his Princess off her feet! :D

Oh my God, I really cant wait for this one. And a request lastly, *shuts eyes and asks*, would YOU mind being my story teller every day? [read: Updates] 😳😆

awww... I will certainly keep this going as long as I possibly can sweetie 😃

Keep up the great work! You're doing awesome ;)

big hugs

naina🤗

love
-V-

Originally posted by: ASRandKKGSRFan

❤️❤️❤️Hey!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! I have a lot to say, but because I'm super excited about how things have progressed with Arnav and Khushi, I don't think I can muster my words together 😕 ... but I'll give it a go 😆

lol I'm excited too!! 😆

WOW!!! The description of Kashmiri breakfast was perfect. Infact it felt like I was reading about food that was fit for royalty. Having said that, our Arnav and Khushi are no less than that. Beautiful. Charming. Elegant. Loving.

Ahhh ... the list is pretty much endless. 😊

I think its something to admire really that the charming, loving and caring man in question can be Arnav one minute, then ASR the strong businessman the next.

the intention here is to keep him true to his character...😃

Oh yesss. As Khushi was coming out if the bathroom in a towel, I thought that Arnav would pop up behind her to tease her. Surprisingly that didn't happen. He decided to be a gentleman and leave her clothes, inner wear and toiletries on the bed for her to get ready. Sweeet 😳 >>> Then the little note from Arnav. That was super cute! Especially when it read about turning his fantasy into reality. Just imagine what other fantasies he'd like to turn into reality once they're married. That'll be fun, considering Khushi's reactions ... 😆

I'm having a ball imagining how much fun we'll have post wedding!

Anyway, another magnificent chapter. Beautifully written. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thanks for the PM.

thank you for commenting hun! as always, I really do appreciate it!!

Originally posted by: rinku28

How is it that the queen of cliffhangers never fails?

becoming a full time mission I tell you!😆

Love this story and the developments of each character and situations. I'm glad he helped her decide on the overall location of jalebi junction...wherever it may be, proving that he wants what's best for her.

Can't wait on what she says about getting married!!!! I think this one time she may actually surprise him and say YES!

As always...Continue soon!

Love,

Rinku28

Originally posted by: KreyaArshiLover

WHAR MARRIAGE?? Omg I am gonna die off heart attack specailly with your all CLIFFHANGERS