ARHI FF: MasterClass: Part 59 new thread - Page 71

Originally posted by: Firebolt

Okay so actually i found this story about 2 weeks back and have been obsessed with it ever since.

well in that case - a very warm welcome to Master Class!!! 😃

WHY did it take me SO long to find this amazing piece of fiction i'll never know.

lol... well I for one am very glad that you found it 😃

What do i love about it? Well pretty much everything.

To star off your narrative style is absolutely addictive. I absolutely loved all the internal monologues that A & K have with themselves.

thank you...

Arnav and his devil+angel,Khuhsi's conscience - , i could totally picture that. And it is the fun element to this story. As an author you definitely made a distinct impression on me and as writer it's always important to have your own 'voice' and you nailed it!

It kept me coming back for more!

Plot development - Honestly it's been perfectly paced.

again.. I am humbled by your words - so a big big thank you 😳

You began with A and K who were at odds with each other and developed it into a beautiful love story. The development of trust and honesty, two very important things, was very well showcased while you developed your plot.

Another thing that sets apart this story, is how you describe A & K's relationship as being a mutual learning process. You had this concrete idea and have stuck with it from it beginning, never losing sight that this is 'Master Class'. (Fab title by the way)

Your characterization of A and K is very...how do i put it... real. That is to say it's very easy to relate to your characters. Their emotions, their insecurities, their love - is all very relatable and entirely swoon worthy.

this aspect of the story was very imoprtant to me. Just because they have found each other, and then fallen in love doesnt mean their inherent characters changes... it does mean that evolution has to occur and this is what these two are going through 😃

Speaking of swoon worthy - OMG I AM SO IN LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE ROMANCE IT MAKES ME BLUSH AND SIGH AND AZCXBVSDHKLdsjjdbfd

*ahem*

I mean you write romance really well.

And i'm more or less in love with this story.

Thank you for sharing this with me!

now that you have found us... please dont become a stranger ok😃

p.s. can I just say I LOVE your profile picture... McDreamy holds a soft spot in my heart and needless to say, whenever I see him... I do have a swoon moment! 😆