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hii friends
this is my first SS & it's dedicate to our favourt Sneha Kapoor.
I hope ke me iske sath justis kar pau. I know me jyada nai likh pati bt fir bhi i'm trying just for Sneha i'll miss her on D3 so here r d characters
SWAYAM SHEKHAVAT- a young, handsome boy who belongs to Mumbai & basically from a small village bt for sake of business his father come here & sattled here. his passion is dance & who doesn't believe in love
SHARON RAIPRAKASH- A beautiful girl who belongs to a small village & also like dance bt kanhi se sahi training nai li. she is hard working & a clever student & love her parents most & waiting for Mr. perfect of her life.
Rey- a hadsome college boy who love dance & also Kriya.
Kriya -a beautiful college girl who love dance & Rey & also love to do differnt things.
all d other characters r same Simmi Rinni Neha Vishakha who r in pair with Nil Amar Vickey Bharat
so how is d intro of Character it's interesting nice/ok/bad Plz comment. This is my First try of writing & I choose swaron for dat it's my 1st SS on swaron & hope k mene kuch achcha likha ho???
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3232493&PID=69526407�
4rth part
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3232493&TPN=13
5th part
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3232493&TPN=15
this is my first SS & it's dedicate to our favourt Sneha Kapoor.
I hope ke me iske sath justis kar pau. I know me jyada nai likh pati bt fir bhi i'm trying just for Sneha i'll miss her on D3 so here r d characters
SWAYAM SHEKHAVAT- a young, handsome boy who belongs to Mumbai & basically from a small village bt for sake of business his father come here & sattled here. his passion is dance & who doesn't believe in love
SHARON RAIPRAKASH- A beautiful girl who belongs to a small village & also like dance bt kanhi se sahi training nai li. she is hard working & a clever student & love her parents most & waiting for Mr. perfect of her life.
Rey- a hadsome college boy who love dance & also Kriya.
Kriya -a beautiful college girl who love dance & Rey & also love to do differnt things.
all d other characters r same Simmi Rinni Neha Vishakha who r in pair with Nil Amar Vickey Bharat
so how is d intro of Character it's interesting nice/ok/bad Plz comment. This is my First try of writing & I choose swaron for dat it's my 1st SS on swaron & hope k mene kuch achcha likha ho???
All d comments & criticisms r welcomed Plz guyz do honest comment i'm waiting for dat
1st chapter
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3232493&TPN=3
2nd chapterhttps://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/67394629
3rd parthttps://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3232493&PID=69526407�
4rth part
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3232493&TPN=13
5th part
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3232493&TPN=15
Bindi
Udne Ki Aasha
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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