Life is so unpredictable (SWARON) - Page 3

Originally posted by: marauder

Nice character sketch. Looking forward to the update :)

Chapter 1

thank u frnds for response i kn thoda km he bt i'm happy thoda to mila so here is d first part i kn thoda chota he bt d isska agala part aaj hi raat ko update kar dungi sorry for dar littele one

& plz thoda grammatical & spellings mistek hoga so plz kindly ignore dat

(all d boyz are sitting in d cantine & disscusing about the charity function is going to hend in a small town which is near to home town of swayam shekhawat & all r excited for that)

Swayam : so gyz r u ready for d function ???

Every one: of course yes.

Bharat : tu to sala bahot khush hoga ham tere home town ke pass ja rahe he ??? ha thoda thoda

Rey : ha swayam..;) hey guy y don't we also visit his villege after function ha guyz??? Wtz u all think??? Ha swayam??? Wese bhi hammen se koi villege nai dekha???To kya khayal he???

Swayam : wese idea bura nai he!!! Wt u think ??? I don't mind wese bhi me bhi 15 years se nai gaya so me also excited ??? ha guyz me papa se bolunga sara arrangments ho jayega & koi problem bhi nai hogi & apna weeken bhi ho jayega ??? ha guyz???

Every one : (with excitement) yehaaa'

Swayam : so it's desided k sab function k baad sida mere Village jayenge' & me papa se bolke sare arrengements karvata hu. Par ek prob he?

Rey : kya??

Swayam : ladkiya?? Hamre sath wo bhi to hongi na wnha ???

Rey : to???

Swayam : to unhe kya kahenge??? I mean unhe bhi invite kare ???

Rey : of course yes. Ham unhe invite karenge & I think dey also liked to come there& achcha he na unke sath thoda tym spent karne ka moika mil jayega

Swayam : ok .

Rey : swayam ruk y don't u think abt love??? u kn wt ye pyar na world ka sabse best feeling he . & agar tu usse utna dur knyu bhagta he???

Swayam: are rey plz abhi nai & u kn dat me ye love shv me believe hi nai karta so tu plz ab tu bhi start na kar .

Rey : bt kabhi to kisi girl ko achche se dekh lita kar & esa rhodi hota he sari girls ek jesi nai hoti godne sab ke liye pair banaya hi he!!! & (cut him in middle)

Swayam : yar rey tu bhi Krita k sath sath ye senti typ ho gaya he & me pyar me blv nai karta & so ye sab mere liye matter nai karta so plz tu or koi bhi topic le le me sun lunga bt plz ye nai

Rey : n kabhi ho gaya to pyar??

Swayam : i bet ye ptar & all mere liye nai he & so it's nt possible

Rey :(to himself) [plz god iss baar na jisko bhi apne isss idot ke liye banaya he usse milva dena plz tab jake iska lyf normal ho jaye ga plz uski angel jaldi uski lyf ho plz..] u r impossible man & agar yar ho gaya na to choduga nai me tuje

Swayam : curruction I M possible & kabhi nai hoga abb chale teri wali ko baye ne abt our pln??& agar nai gaye to tu jayega kam se

Rey: ok chal

( dey both go to girls & invite dem for villege visit & all girls ( Kriya , Simmi, Rinni, Neha, Vishakha) agreed for dat except Anannya & also excited, & thanked swayam for dat..:D

Kriya : kya swayam sach me u taking abt villege?? how sweet of u!!! ab ham sach me villege dekhenge???

Anannya: hw eles iuee!!! I don't like dat idea. I think it's better k hum koi foreign trip pe jaye?? U kn mene suna he villeges r so dirty & villegers r so ... so ye villege jane vala idea is not good.

(she is nt swaym's GF bt she alwayz usse chipkki rehti he)

Neha : neha loving to visit a villege..:D so neha is thanking u guyz for inviting us..hena Vishakha

Vishakha: ya dude it's fantastic!!!

Rinni : eyh sach me mene vese bhi kabhi villege dekha nai so I'm excited to see real beauty of nature so meri bhi ha he

Simmi : me too.

Swayam: so it's desided k ham sab jaa rahe he mere village.

Rey : so abb hame sare arrengments properly karne honge ladkuya bhi hongi sath me to.

Swayam: don't worry hamara wanah bhot bada ghar he & wanha pe sare fasalities bhi he. So don't worry.

Rey : ok den kal milte he sharp 7:30 am.

Swayam: ok

@ 8:00 Pm shekhawat mention

Swayam: papa ham ek charity function k liye r Jodhpur ja rahe he so ham sab frnds ne socha ki ham event ke baad ham apne villege jaye, kisi ne villege kabhi nai dekha & mene bhi almost 15 years se nai gaya so 'if we got permmtd???

Swayam'd Father : of course y should I mind??? Infect I loved it k mera beta apne villege jana chahta he & sare arrangements karva dunga & beta plz ha wnha hamare bahot sare relatives & Gautam uncle he unhe me tumhare bare me bol deta hu wo tumhe sari help karenge tumhe rehne me & sara ganov dekane me so me unhe call kar deta hu .

Swayam: ye Gautam uncle means wo hi na jinke bare me aap kafi baar bat karte he urz best friend??

Swa.F :ha wo hi . wo bhi ye baat sunke khush hoga & he loves to help u all so my son don't worry @ all

Swayam : ok Thanx papa

Swayam's f : by d way when r u leaving ??

Swayam : tomorrow morning & when consert khatam ho jayega ham thodi der me wanha se nikal jayege means kal sham tak around 8:00 or 8:30

Swayam's father: ok to me unhe bol deta hu dat u'll take dinner der . good night

Swayam : good night ( he leaved d room)

When he enter in his room he feels excited & go on his bed

@ early in d morning alarm rings & all gets up all r excited so all get ready & meet ar air port & get d flight for rajsthan & deir journey start

On d other hand @ 7:00 am

all d family members of Gutam raiprakash gethred @ pooja place except one & den she entered in a white choodidar & pink top & white dupatta , having little earings, & bindi on her forhead & also join dem in pooja

Mrs Raiprakhash: aaj fir tum let ho & college bhi late ho jaogi..

Girl : sry maa bt kya karu ye matching earings mul hinai rahe the (babt like face make)

Mrs raiprakash: are koi or pehnleti & ab jaldi kar nasta kar & ja jaldii nai t fir se late hogi

Girl : are maa aaj panda thodi he aaj tho charity function he na so ate hue bhi lete hoga isika jake preparation bhi karma he

Gautam : are abb usse baad me bolna & Sharon beta aap ao jaldi & dhyan se wasp ana ha

Sharon : ji papa .( she leaves house with paratha in her hand)

Mrs raiprakash : are nasta to thik se kar . hey bhagvaan kab ye ladki badi hogi

Sharon : are tym nai he & me kabhi bhi badi nai hone wali tum jo bhi bolo& she started her scooty ( goes for college which is in near by town )also call her frnd & dey leave d village'

Mrs raiprakash: are bigad kar rakha he beti ko?? Najene bhagwan ye kab badi hogi

Gautam: are bachhihe & uski sari wishes to pii karni e hame to karne do use jo uska man chahe'

now my first part competed 😃

hw is it ??? plz tell me honestly waiting for ur replies 😊

thank u😃

Originally posted by: cuteswayu

hey beena! sorry for being so late.. I ve read the cs,but forgot to comment.. sorry again.. cuming to the review.. nice cs... swayam and sharon are from village.. seemS realy interesting.. the first chapter was realy nice... Thanks for the pm.. p.s:my xams r cming up in nov,n i wil be inactive frm 15oct.. SO Wil nt be able to cmnt on any further updates.. bt wil read them all and write a long cmnt once i will be back in december..😊

Originally posted by: idiot_box

beeny first chapter was really nice...sorry couldn't comment pehle..i was a little busy!anyway i liked chapter 1...thanks for the pm...and update soon!😊

mind blowing update just fantastic part