SS: Magnetism {Chap 4 PREVIEW Pg 24} 05/06/13 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: selcouth-names

he was Arnav Singh
Raizada, the man who spent his entire life being told that the sun
shines out of his backside
, and he would never apologise.

🤣🤣

It was really great.
And as some one mentioned above in the comments, i love the teenage
Arnav- Khushi. It's only by these SS/FF that i get to feel them like that.
So good job for coming up with this.
And i am kinda glad that her friend is not as blind and can see that the sparks are def flying.😳

And i hope your lappy doesn't give much of a problem. So that we get a faster update. 😉




😆 I was trying to sum him up in one sentence, bearing Khushi's thoughts in mind and I thought that was the best way to describe him!

Thank you so much! I have no grievances with the reader who said they don't like the teenage concept; I don't expect everyone to like it and being a writer is about taking risks and trying new things. Sometimes risks will pay off, other times they won't. But everyone is entitled to an opinion & I'm glad you like teenage stories! 😳

It's always the friends who see things the person involved has no idea about. Khushi feeling attracted to Arnav & her friends picking up on signals indicating that are two different things. But it's usually always the friends who notice first, especially if it starts off a hatred!

My laptop has gone now & if I'm lucky I will get it back on the 11th. Whether that happens is another story.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .DivaDeluxe.

Aw hope you get your laptop back soon!😊

The update is amazing, Ghausia! Just the perfect length😉
Aww the arrogant ASR complemented Khushi? Wow, that's huge😲.
I wonder what answer Khushi will give to that question. What exactly is going on between ArHi?
No one knows..



Thank you! I actually tried to use my desktop PC yesterday & it was the worst experience ever - with half the RAM of my laptop it was just too show and I couldn't use it.

Thank you! I know there were some complaints regarding the length last time but I'm glad you guys found this update an adequate length!

Haha imagine Khushi's shock. It was such an abrupt compliment that she thought she must've imagined it at first! Do either of them know what's going on? Or are they both as stubborn as each other...?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SaRunLicious

Awesome update Ghausia!


I loved the tension between Arnav-Khushi and the way he teased her. I was able to picturize the whole scene of Arnav smirking and Khushi blushing 😃

"he was Arnav Singh Raizada, the man who spent his entire life being told that the sun shines out of his backside, and he would never apologise." 🤣

"he didn't know how to laugh, hence the sideways smirk." 😆

I wonder how Khushi will answer that question! I can't wait to read the next update!! 😊

Loved it! 😊
P.S: I hope you get your laptop back soon 😳



Thank you! 😳
Hehe poor Khushi - when put in a situation like that what can she do? 😆
I'm glad you enjoyed it hun & I will update this as soon as I can!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ArHiLover-x

Awesome update!! i loved it alot, and thanks for the PM :)



Thank you & you're welcome!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazY-4-BaRuN

I am your silent reader ! 😃 *shameless grin* 😃


You kno what.. i love this FF.. It actually.. u know kinda expresses your state when you have a crush.. all Conscious.. 😳😳

OMG>. The question ! 😳😳



Why the silence girl? Main tumhe kha toh nahi jaoongi 😆
Aww, thank you! I'm glad you feel that I'm giving that feeling justice! Especially if it's someone you start off hating, you want to ignore those feelings as much as possible! I'd ignore those feelings anyway but that's another story 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: panck

Thank you for the PM
Brings back memories form high school
Guess everyone has one ASR in their class..
Great story and concept



You're welcome!
😆 Yep, everyone has that one person they love to hate! Thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 207shikha

huh..?? b/w her nd arnav..??

baba re seriously in schools, and tiny gossip

do spread like fire..!! just loved it.! continue it soon,,



Gossip travels so fast it's unbelievable. I've experienced that enough times at school. I told one girl the university where my sisters were studying & within an hour everyone knew! You can't keep a secret for long in a school so you have to be very careful who you share them with. There are probably 3 people I know that I can honestly say anything to without fear of it being spread everywhere. But girls especially are like vultures sometimes.

Thank you for the comment and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura13

It was a very nice and well written chp.Looking forward to the next update😊



Thank you hun!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great concept, looking forward to future updates. Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the PM! Sorry for late commenting. Busy with applications.

Great update! Oh man, when Arnav called her name during the photo session I was like ooo he noticed her change in appearance. But what the..? Picking on her, tsk tsk. I agree with Khushi's thought on punching him😆
But he did compliment her...awww! My reactions usually waver very fast, lol. Hmm and Amy realized the secret glances they give each other...maybe she's jealous? or curious as many classmates woul dbe for gossip?
I never like Truth or Dare for this purpose during high school. All secrets would be out 😳

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