SS: Magnetism {Chap 4 PREVIEW Pg 24} 05/06/13 - Page 12

Originally posted by: MrsSanayaBSobti

well the SS is fabulous from the school romance point of view.

But honestly the issue i found here that

we already have an image of ASR as a matured guy fixed inside our brains. There have been many FF's where asr has been presented different from what he is in the show..Least he was made a college student but not a school kid. He was always presented as a matured person.

Potryaing Khushi as high school kid is still justified cause we have seen her kiddish nature .

Initially i thought u will show asr as the trustee of the school whose sister also studies there and he develops attrcation for Khushi as his teenage sister becomes Khushi's frend.

anyways good luck ...

Thank you for your comment but I think I need to clarify a few things here. Firstly, the character of ASR is based on a real person. Khushi's character isn't but ASR is. I have known him for well over a year now so when I write about him, I write about how he did/would have responded in certain situations. My character sketch at the start of the story basically proved that this wasn't going to be following the exact characterisations in the real show; Khushi's different too but creative licence can be used when an FF is written. I have tried to keep this as close to reality as possible to begin with & so far all of this has actually happened.

ASR is a college student in my story - he isn't a little 10-year-old kid. Our school is a sixth form school & in Britain sixth form is college. You have two years in a sixth form or college and then you move onto university. With my school, the 'internals' I refer to have had all their secondary school education at the same school & the 'externals' just joined to go to the college/sixth form part of the school. So although I tend to call it school it is actually a college.

All the trustees at school are really old... That wouldn't gel with my story and I'd have no basis to go on. The only reason I began writing this story was because of something a friend of mine said in my Biology class the other day; it's just about the journey 2 polar opposite individuals go through in college & the twists an turns that lie ahead for them. The romance element is for my readers - I know no one likes a hate story going on for too long.

Originally posted by: -Tintin.

Did He Just Compliment Her ?! ; O😳

Even Khushi doesn't know 😆

great...👏

Love this concept! Looking forward to more!! :)

he was Arnav Singh Raizada, the man who spent his entire life being told that the sun shines out of his backside, and he would never apologise.

🤣🤣

It was really great. And as some one mentioned above in the comments, i love the teenage Arnav- Khushi. It's only by these SS/FF that i get to feel them like that.
So good job for coming up with this.
And i am kinda glad that her friend is not as blind and can see that the sparks are def flying.😳

And i hope your lappy doesn't give much of a problem. So that we get a faster update.😉

Awesome update Ghausia!