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Posted: 19 years ago

thanks guys for those awesome comments. I m sorry u guys cant update today i ll do it in the morning as soon as i wake up if i am not lazy and wake up on time. But u guys can read my other FF i just updated it

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/285290/ff-kahin-na-kahin-dark-passion-pg-126

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
lookin forward for next part! continue whenever u can!
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Part 9

She looks around for tape to reseal the package but too late Angad is already out of the shower…

"RIAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!" …and he is not happy

"What the HELL ARE U DOING!!!!!!" He rushes over and grabs the package away from her. "U KNOW I TOLD U NEVER TO TOUCH MY STUFF, I am glad u didn't open any of the letters they are very confidential."

"Bhai where did u get all these letters from?"

"The post office of course"

"but why are so many ppl writing to U"

"Er…er… they are not writing to me, of course they are not writing to me these …er… these letters are for the mall I work in, just complains of ppl on different things we need to fix, they asked me to pick it up today and bring it the next day." Angad smiles quite pleased with himself that he could make up such a original story, but then he was always full of ideas. But little did he know that his sister was 5 steps ahead of him.

"OH so they were papers from the mall were they" Ria stands up while Angad sits on the bed as she looks at him with anger. "Bhai tell me what this is about before I really hurt u, and I am serious!!!"

"Er… what…what do u mean what this is about, I told u what its about." Said Angad feeling uneasy.

"Bhai u cannot lie to me anymore I read one of the letters" she sits down on the bed next to him, "Why did u lie to me?"

Angad sighs and knows there is no way to escape if she read the letters, "What do u want to know, u probably know by now that I am Sahil writer of so many books that so many people love."

"Yes I know but why are u hidden why don't u tell everyone who u are."

"Ria did u remember I told to wait till I am 18 then we can go away from this hell and away from our father."

"So that means-- what does that mean."

"The only person who knows who I am is josh he is my editor, and even he has never seen my face before. I am afraid that people will find out my identity before I turn 18 and then what will happen to all the money that I earned. U have seen that drunken dad of urs always threatening us for money what would he do if he knew I had millions of dollars. I have to wait until I am 18 and in full control of my assets till then I can do nothing."

"But bhai…we could go to court"

Angad shakes his head, "I don't want to take the chance… ria u have to promise me u can't tell anyone."

"Come on bhai at least let me tell Kripa she is so crazy over sahil if she knew u were sahil she would even agree to marry u, and don't u dare lie to me I know how much u like her"

Angad smiles, "no ria not yet and I think Angad is good enough for her, and u cant argue with me b/c I have proof"

"Proof??"

"Yeh, she went on a date with me today." Angad says going read

"Ohhh really bhai that is so coool, Kripa is going to be my bhabhi!!! How come she never told me when she called??"

"Kripa called??"

"Ya she did, when u were taking a shower. She was the one who gave me the idea that u were hiding something. So bhai have u ever replied to any of these letters."

"Ya some, but can u imagine me trying to answer each and every one of these."

"Hey bhai did u read letter that I wrote."

Angad laughs, "Yes I actually read it, it was quite embarrassing but soo funny. 'Oh sahil I just love ur books almost make me feel in fantasy land'

Ria blushes, "come on bhai if I had known who u were, I would never write it."

"Hey ria I wanted to show u something"

"What??"

Angad opens the drawer and reveal more than thousand pictures of girls in there, "See how many girl are crazy after me, and u were teasing me the other day of having no girlfriends, I was planning on showing u this that day u got me so pissed."

"Well I wished u had I cant believe I didn't know for this long that u were sahil… grr…. makes me so mad." "Hey bhai can I read these" She says pointing at the letters.

Angad lays back on the bed much more relaxed as though something big was lifed from his chest, "sure go ahead"

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
please cont soon 😛
Edited by kripa_angad=luv - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww it was awesome 😊 😊 😊 continue soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww kl sooo sweet....lov it!!! 😳 👏 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
i just luved the part 😳 . conitue soon muni
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow to good continue soon dont make me wait to long continue soon please lol show ria reading some letter and make the letters funny like a whole bunch of girls saying i love sahil lol 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 10

Angad walks to his next class after his English class, and was thinking why Mrs. J hated him so much.

"Hey Angad"

He turns around and see Kripa standing with some one. He had went right by her without noticing lost in his own thoughts. Angad walks towards them wondering what the guy was doing with her, "Hey Kripa what's up" He says hugging Kripa.

The guy has a weird look on his face as Angad kisses Kripa on her cheek. hatred? "This is Tarun"

"Oh hey, we have already met we were together in math last year, but never the less nice to meet u."

Tarun smiles and shakes his hand, "nice to meet u too"

"Tarun is a really good friend of mine. Hey Angad don't forget ur suppose to come over at my house today.

"Ya i know. Well I'll be off my classroom is pretty far it'll take me quite a while to get there. See u around Tarun." Angad leaves feeling a twinge of jealousy, not because he didn't like tarun, but because he was Harry's best friend. He didn't know how they became friends because they were totally opposite. He hadn't talked to him much before because of the rivalry b/w him and Harry, but he liked the guy. But it still didnt stop him from wondering what was he doing with kripa.

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Kripa's house

Angad knocks on the door which is opened by Kripa after a few seconds.

"Come in"

"Thanks," he walks in the house is huge probably 20 time bigger than his little apartment, "Big house, looks empty though"

"Ya because it is empty, I home alone, mom and dad are gone shopping and Prithvi… I have no idea where he is." Angad insides give a slights jump, they were all alone that was just awesome. She leads him inside, "Sit down, would u like something to drink."

"nah nothing" she sits down beside him.

"Why did u call me here?"

"Angad I don't know what u ll think of me calling u here like this but I have got to know."

"Know, know what?" Angad is now totally confused

"I have to know who killed him?"

Angad's heart sinks, is that why she had called him here to find out about her dead boyfriend. "Harry? He killed himself."

"No he didn't I know he didn't, I knew him he would never do such a thing."

"Kripa the police investigated…"

"No they didn't they couldn't find a motive for someone to kill him so they just said he killed himself. U have got to help me Angad I couldn't live with this, I couldn't live without knowing." She is almost close to tears.

Angad sighs, "What do u want me to do."

Kripa point to the files on the table, "this has all the evidence all the police reports everything I want u to help me find the real killer."

"Ok I ll help u but I cant guaranty anything. I don't even know weather we are going to find something." He holds Kripa's hand, "I ll do it just for u." He is hugging her now.

"Thanks, Angad u don't know how much this means to me." She kisses him on the lips, Angad's body is stiffened in surprise but he relaxes melting in her arms, and kisses her back, thinking this wasn't a total waste of time after all.

Next part: Major twist!!! view into Kripa's mind, in other words the next part will be for the first time Kripa's point of view and not Angad's.

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
darn y is she still thinkin bout Harry 😡 !!! MOVE ON, THERE IS A WAYYY HOTTER GUY RIGHT IN FRONT OF U MAN OPEN UR EYES KRIPA lol!! awesome part plz continue soon!

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