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Posted: 19 years ago
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muni darling.. fab part 👏 .. wonder who that "note" was from 😆 m guessing kripa 😉 and hope rano finds out soon haahha
once again great job 👏
-Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Cool ff! that was an awesome part! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 8

The phone rang and Ria went to pick it up,

"Hello"

"Hello this is Ria"

"Oh hey Ria this is Kripa"

"Why did u call?"

"No reason really just getting bored at home. U r brother came today to get a job at the same place I work. U didn't tell him that I worked there did u?"

Ria is really surprised she thinks to herself, "If he went to get the job today, where has he been getting all this money from all these days?"

Ria lost in her thoughts doesn't answer her, Kripa gets impatient "Hello are u there?"

"Er… ya I am here, are u sure he came today?"

"Ya I saw him get hired with my own two eyes. You didn't answer my question did u tell him I worked there."

"Ya I did, but that's not why he came to work there he was the one who suggested the idea first. Anyways what's going on with u? How is Prithvi?

"Oh he is fine and I am ok I guess… Speaking of Prithvi, I just remembered I have to ask u something."

"Er… what??"

"Ria u know now days Prithvi is going out with this girl, but he absolutely refuses to tell me her name, its getting me so frustrated I don't care who he goes out with but I just got to know. Is there any chance that he told u anything about this or weather u saw him with some girl."

Ria answers this time but a little too quickly "No of course not, I mean if he hasn't told u how would I know. I have absolutely know idea."

"Ria chill yaar, ur acting as though I just accused u of something…I gotta go dad is calling me."

"Hey, Kripa is there someone with u in ur bedroom I can here sounds on the background

"Oh no its no one its… er… probably coming from the outside of the room. Anyways I got to go. See ya later."

"Bye" She wonders aloud, "I am sure there was someone there with her, forget it ria ur thinking too much these days."

Ria puts the phone down and just sits there and wonders, "What's up with bhai these days? He has never lied to me before, where is he getting all this money from?"

Ria eyes open in shock as she remembers the brown bags, "I have seen on tv that when ppl hide their buissness it has to do with drugs. So my brother is doing business of drugs? I think he must also take those drugs no wonder he looks high on something these few days. I have got to find out"

Ria sneaks into her brother's room lucky for her he is still in the showers. She has to search a while to find the brown bags, she finds them under his bed. She takes them out and places them on top of the bed. She hesitates a while, but decides she has a right to know if her brother has been doing something he shouldn't be. She opens the bag and is surprised and happy and shocked to find letters in there, 100's of letters.

"Ok so now I know that my brother is not dealing with drugs, but I wonder what has he been dealing with?" It doesn't take her long to decide how to find out. She slits open a letter.

Ria's thoughts will be in italics

Hey Sahil,

(Sahil?? Oh god it can't be, my brother Sahil!! and to think i was crazy about him. EWW EWW EWWWWW)

My name is priya, I read ur last book it was so wonderful, I was like dreaming about it for so many nights and about u. U must be so hot and handsome

(my brother gets offers of dates from girls??), why don't u give me ur address or something we can go on like a nice date or dinner, it will be so romantic. I want to know how the famous Sahil looks like, don't worry I wont let anyone know. I sent u my picture tell me if u like it. I have written to u many times before but u never reply back plzz reply back. (Its no wonder he doesn't reply back u havent even seen him and ur like running after him, he is handsome and hot by chance what if he was some old guy, how disgusting)And some of the questions I have also need to be answered, like where do u get ur ideas from? (that's what I have always wondered too) do u have a girlfriend? If yes then is she better looking then me. I am sure u have seen my picture by now and u cannot resist my charm so come running to me, I ll always be waiting for u.

Bye

With Lots and lots of love

PRIYA

Ria takes a look at the picture and doesn't like it one bit even though the girl is quite good looking. "I am glad bhai didn't reply back to her, or I would be waging a war with him. 'resist my charm' she is saying as though she is the beauty queen."

She take the letter with her she doubted her brother would notice, and looks around to find a tape to reseal the package, but too late her brother comes out from his shower…

"RIA!!!!" …and he is not happy.

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#94
Awesome Part!
Ria's thoughts were hilarious!!! 😆 😆 😆
plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#95
haha that was funny Ria liking Sahil, her own bro lol! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#96
ahhah wonderful part 👏 👏 wonder what angad will do 😆
-Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago
#97
wow that suckfor ria..she cant like sahil anymore 😆 😆 wow cant eait to see wht hapens next!!cont soon
himani 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#98
Just caught up that was a fab part!!!

Iqra
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Posted: 19 years ago
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just read your fanfic and just looove your storyline 👏 👏
plzzz continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
this ff is just fantastic! continue soon

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