Arhi SS:MISTRESS CH10 UPDATED pg 127 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
interesting start
do continue it
thanx 4 da pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
loved it...poor khushi😭waiting to read wt happened in her life??? continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
i'm captivated in your story
its too good👏
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#64
Nice start. That's bad 😭
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Originally posted by: Shree.Nanda

i'm captivated in your story

its too good👏


thankz😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
A Different concept,poor Khushi,Arnav a Ruthless character,waiting to read how the story unravels
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
cant wait tooo read the next part :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ooh sounds good
cant wait to read on=]
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Originally posted by: hira_arnie

Part 1:

Hello all, I am so touched of everyone's response to this SS, I was actually really scared of starting it, because I haven't written anything like this! I really hope you enjoy the second part. Before I post to update I just wanted to clear something:The whole story will be clear in flashbacks...


Author's note:
"I condemn indirect bashing in the name of constructive critisism, if u really feel like being constructive... pm me, i wont eat u".
If you have any problem with the story you are free to express your thoughts with me on the thread. but if you have anything else to discus other than the story such as grammar, spelling mistakes, tense problems, structure PLEASE PM ME.

Really nice, looking forward to see what happens next, Pm please

She felt the sharp pain once more and thought she would buckle over. She had never felt this much physical pain ever. Mental anguish though...No...she wouldn't go there. She would think of all that today. She wouldn't think of him today.because of him she was facing all this alone...khushi kumari gupta never ever need any help from him...


"she never ever sees his face" Khushi mumbled to herself. he has destroyed her in each and every way but now she have to be strong not for her but for the sake of a new life which is growing inside her...


Still, she willed her mind to focus on the physical pain. In just a few minutes, she would have some help.


"Breathe, Khushi" she told herself. "Haye, Devi Maiyya! Please help me get through this."


For the next few minutes, Khushi willed herself to take deep breaths and keep walking. She was almost there.


It was not easy. The physical pain she could bear. But at this time, it became impossible for her to block all the memories she had managed to keep at bay for the past few months.


Images flashed in front of her. His anger, his irritation, his annoyance, his flirting, his passion of destroying her.


"Stop it, Khushi" she said aloud. A few heads on the road turned to look at her."Why! Why now?"why she was thinking about him now,mostly in this condition...

''She never forgive him not because he destroyed her life,because he destroyed every relation which is related to her...and now she is strong enough to protect her only hope of life for which she is struggling so hard to protect the little soul from that beast'' Khushi thought to herself


She was stupid. She could never have that closure. Not now. Not anymore.


"Arnavji" she whispered. The physical pain and the mental anguish coincided and came to a crescendo.


She couldn't be brave anymore. She couldn't do this alone anymore.she need someone help but at that time no one was there to helpe her...


She collapsed at the entrance of the hospital. A nurse came running towards her.


"Please. Please help me. I am going to have a baby"khushi screamed as another cramp hit her...


So... How Was It?! 😉
For further pm's buddy me😊
Tell me if I should continue with it 😕


I WILL CONTINUE ON GUD REPONSE...
New readers BUDDY ME for PMs because it is hard to hunt down the people who want PM or scrap me letting me know.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting SS. Please update soon

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