Arhi SS:MISTRESS CH10 UPDATED pg 127 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
That was intense and heart wrenching update!

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As a writer and friend, I want to advise you to write full smut (only if you are comfortable) and longer chapter. It will make the story more masaley daar. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: KIARSHI

superbbb starting hira di😊


beautifully written😉

OMG ur alive😆
thankz😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: CuteWinks

OMG! SHE IS PREGNANT WITH HIS CHILD? AND HE STILL TREATS HER LIKE SHIT!

As a writer and friend, I wanted to advise you to write full smut (if you are comfortable) and longer chapter. It will make story more intense and masaley daar.

Looking forward to next chapter. Update soon. :)


yah sure i will try my best😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
awesome start.. loved it...

can you plz pm me whenever you update... and do continue soon..

take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Loved it :) plz pm me the updates :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: hira_arnie


yah sure i will try my best😊



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Sorry, I edited my comment.

I was confused whether he knew about the pregnancy.

I'm sure you will.

Good luck! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: CuteWinks



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Sorry, I edited my comment.

I was confused whether he knew about the pregnancy.

I'm sure you will.

Good luck! :)


thankz😉
itz a screte that wheather he khowz about her pregrancy😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Wow an amazing start. From the title it's quite hard to decipher whether Khushi is the lady that Arnav is married to or is she his Mistress. Its all quite hard to work out. And where the hell did the baby come from? Questions, questions and more questions. There are so many questions to be answered. I just hope that you answer them soon.
And just a teeny weeny suggestion please make your updates longer 😆.
Thats was good. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sending me the PM twice! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
V v good! Omg! Poor khushi , pregnant n alone!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

LOVED IT'

PLZ PM ME WHEN U UPDATE


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