PHELA PYAR/not continueing

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PHELA PYAR

You are outside. The camera is looking at the moon. Then you see a building called Night Club. You enter. Inside you see a girl with beautiful heavy payals on with a lot of work on it.

She is wearing a beautiful red lehnga.

With that she has beautiful bangles on. They are gold and red!

Beautiful diamond set.

And she has a beautiful nose ring!

The girl is dancing at a bar. She looks really beautiful. Then you see her face. It's none other than Kripa.

The song that she is dancing to is Ghoomar from Chup Chup Ke. (Kripa is NOT singing it!)

ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar ghoomar re
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar ghoomar ghoomar ghoomar - 3
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke
le gaya dil mera dilbar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
pehle mere dil ko dhadkaaya
chori se phir mera chain churaya
pehle mere dil ko dhadkaaya
chori se phir mera chain churaya
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke
le gaya dil mera dilbar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar

aankhen mili banke haseen aaisa laga saansen ruki
mujhko nahi kuchh bhi pata kaise chala yeh silsila
tere jaadu ka kamaal behki behki teri chaal
usko naa mera khayal kar gaya mera aaisa haal
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke
le gaya dil mera dilbar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re


ghoomar ghoomar ghoomar ghoomar
ghoomar ghoomar ghoomar
jhul gaya ab yeh chil man
badhne lagi dil ki lagan
kuchh toh mujhe hone laga
mera sukoon khone
laga sochu ??? ka jawaab jaagu
saari saari raat mere deewane
jasbaat aaye uske khayalaat
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke
le gaya dil mera dilbar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
pehle mere dil ko dhadkaaya
chori se phir mera chain churaya
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke
le gaya dil mera dilbar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar

Just when the song finished, someone (who was drunk) got up and started to misbehave with Kripa. No one cared. Everyone thought that the guy was lucky because Kripa was really HOT!

K- Chodo Mujhe!

G- Nahin Chodunga!

K- Please Chodo...


Then the guy faints. Kripa gets free and walks to the back and leaves the bar. She gets a taxi. She rides in the taxi and when she is almost home, she tells the person to stop.

K- Ruko! Mein yahan neklongi...

D- Theek hain...

Kripa leaves and pays him. Then she walks home.

Next- Angad's entry!

HoPe YoU aLl LiKe It So FaR!!!!

Edited by .:KYPHlOvEr88:. - 18 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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lol i llike it. it's different. continue soon. can't wait.

shaheera
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part 😊 😊 😊
continue soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks!! this is from MY imagionation! 😆 😳
64515 thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
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kripa? at a nightclub? wow, those are two things that i would have never have put in a sentence 😆 😆
dont tell me angad is going to be some type of saint 😉
please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: koolchick

kripa? at a nightclub? wow, those are two things that i would have never have put in a sentence 😆 😆
dont tell me angad is going to be some type of saint 😉
please continue soon

dat is wot i ws thnkin KRIPA in a NIGHTCLUB

continue soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
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welll... you'll find out soon WHY Kripa is working at a night club as a bar dancer... 😕 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome first part...continue soon 😊
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wow really different cont soon!
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next part in a few min!

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Part 2:

You hear music. Then the person who is singing turns around and it is none other than Angad!

C- Angad! Angad!

A- Ok...Ok.. Chill!! This is for all my fans!!

ek kamre mein ham tum band ho gaye

ham tum tum ham - 2

ek kamre mein ham tum band ho gaye

pyar karne ko dono rajamand ho gaye

pehle na dekhe the dilkash yeh pal

yeh lamhe dil ko pasand ho gaye

ek kamre mein ham tum band ho gaye

pyar karne ko dono rajamand ho gaye

tumko yahaan se main jaane na dungi

]ab aur tumko satane na dungi

tumko yahaan se main jaane na dungi

]ab aur tumko satane na dungi

iss raat ko jaan-e-man rok lunga

subaha ko jaldi main aane na dunga

pehle na dekha tha aaisa sama

deewane ham tere sang ho gaye

ek kamre mein ham tum band ho gaye

pyar karne ko dono rajamand ho gaye

dil ki tamanna hai tu mujh pe chha jaa

tujhko bulata hai yeh ishq aaja

dil ki tamanna hai tu mujh pe chha jaa

tujhko bulata hai yeh ishq aaja

madhoshiyo mein mazaa aa raha hai

masti mein kya sochata hai tu raja

jaadu kiya tune kya jaan-e-jaan

yeh dekh ke ham toh dang ho gaye

ek kamre mein ham tum band ho gaye

pyar karne ko dono rajamand ho gaye

pehle na dekhe the dilkash yeh pal

yeh lamhe dil ko pasand ho gaye

ek kamre mein ham tum band ho gaye

pyar karne ko dono rajamand ho gaye

The crowd goes wild! Kripa is also there. Kripa thinks that song was very sick and discusting!! She is about to walk away but when Angad starts snging again she stops and turns to face him.

itana bata do hamein kya huaan hai

khoye khoye rehte hai hum

itana bata do hamein kya huaan hai

khoye khoye rehte hai hum

lagta hai hampe hone laga hai mohabbat ka koi karam

sach hai sanam sach hai sanam sach hai sanam sach hai sanam

jaana hai hamne yeh jaana hain

pyar hai ek nasha

jaana hai hamne yeh jaana hain

pyar hai ek nasha

dil ko betaabiyon mein aane laga hai mazaa

jaadu kya chalaya kyon dil tumpe aaya

ab tak yeh samjhe na ham

lagta hai hampe hone laga hai mohabbat ka koi karam

sach hai sanam sach hai sanam sach hai sanam sach hai sanam

yeh toh mohabbat ke mausam hai

aaon mohabbat karen

yeh toh mohabbat ke mausam hai

aaon mohabbat karen

jee toh hamara yeh karta hai baahon mein tumko bharen

hone do chubhan yeh jalne do agan yeh

kuchh toh huaan kamse kam

lagta hai hampe hone laga hai mohabbat ka koi karam

sach hai sanam sach hai sanam sach hai sanam sach hai sanam

itana bata do hamein kya huaan hai

khoye khoye rehte hai hum

lagta hai hampe hone laga hai mohabbat ka koi karam

sach hai sanam sach hai sanam sach hai sanam sach hai sanam

la la lala la...

Kripa feels touched by the song. She stays back and watches the concert. Soon the concert ends and Kripa goes backstage because she has a pass and she wants to meet Angad once. Angad is busy flurting with girls. Kripa feels annoyed. She goes up to them. Angad looks at her confused. Then Angad grins.

A (naugthly)- Can I help you?

K (nervous)- Um.. I..

A (smirking)- You what?

K- Can I have an autograph??

A- Sure...

Angad takes Kripa's hand. He is about to sign.

K- Not there!

Angad lets go of her hand.

A- Then where?

K- Of course on a photographed picture!!


Angad is like whatever. Angad tells a guard to get a pic. He signs it and Kripa leaves.

A (in his mind)- That girl was hot!! Oh well!

Next: Will Angad and Kripa meet again??

Edited by .:KYPHlOvEr88:. - 19 years ago

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