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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
i get a feeling that no one likes it... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
i liked it 👏...so will angad help kripa out if she has a mujboori to be a bar dancer?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: koolchick

i liked it 👏...so will angad help kripa out if she has a mujboori to be a bar dancer?

thanks and you'll find out soon!😆😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: blah_blah

fab part!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

thanks! 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PaRt 3:

It's raining outside now. Angad packs up and starts to leave. He gets into his car. Then he sees a girl that is drenched in the rain and is trying to cover herself because she has a white salwaar kameeze. Angad recognizes her.

A (thinking)- That's the girl who ask me for an autograph! Finally I can enjoy her! (grins)

Angad gets out of the car and goes over to her. He holds her waist and pulls her towards him. The girl feels uncomfortable and gets free.

G- What are you doing?

A- Trying to help a girl in need...

G- Well I don't think that that was your real intension...

A- Really and who are you to think that?

G- I'm Kripa Sharma!

A- Whatever... want a lift?

K- Um.. No thanks...

A- Come on.. ok I promise.. I won't do anything bad.. (smirks)

K- Um..

A- Come on Kripa... You're getting wet and it's really dark and cold.. You can stay at my house...

K- I..

A- No.. I said you are coming so you ARE coming!! Get that?

K (gives up)- Ok...

Angad goes to the passenger's seat and Kripa follows. Angad opens the door for her. Kripa sits in kind of unsure if this is the right thing to do. Angad goes and sits in the driver's seat. Angad drives. It is quite. Kripa is mainly lost in her thoughts. Angad is just grinning and driving. Soon they get to Angad's house. Angad gets out and opens the door for Kripa. Kripa gets out. Angad closes the door and walks to the door. Kripa follows. Angad opens the door (to the house). Angad walks in and Kripa does to. Kripa looks around. She is amazed at how nicly decorated it is. Angad sees her looking around and grins.

A- You like it?

Kripa looks at him.

K- Yeah.. it's like a dream house!

A- It can be yours in a way! (naughtly)

K- No way! I'm not marrying you!

A- I never said that.. (grining) Unless you WANT to marry me!

K (getting annoyed)- Shut up!

A (walks closer to her)- And if I don't?

K (getting nervous and walking back)- I..I...I'll...

A (grinning)- You'll what??

K (stops and points a finger at him)- Look Mister Angad... I don't want any trouble!

A (puts her finger down)- Neither do I...

NeXt: I dOn'T kNoW!!

Edited by .:KYPHlOvEr88:. - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26

thanks!😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
naughty naughty angad....wat will he do with Miss Kripa? 😆 😆 😆
continue soon
-Amrit
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
just read your story, and i just looove it-awesome story 👏 👏 👏
continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
awesome story cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
hey awesome part...continue soon cant wait
! 😊

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