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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
thanks everyone who commented!! i told you that the fan-fic will be better in a few parts! 😆 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
that was g8 continue soon 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: kyph05

that was g8 continue soon 😃 😃

thanks for taking the time to read it and comment!😃love you❤️

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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
PaRt 4:

ReCaP:

K (stops and points a finger at him)- Look Mister Angad... I don't want any trouble!
A (puts her finger down)- Neither do I...

NoW:

K (walks away from him)- Ok then...
A (grabs her hand)- Follow me...
K (scared)- WhY?
A- You know Kripa, you talk WAY too much!!
K- Hummp...

Kripa follows Angad. Angad takes her to his room. Kripa looks around. She sees pictures of girls that are wearing SHORT clothes. Angad looks around too.

A- Aren't they hot??

Kripa looks at Angad shocked. Angad looks at her.

A (flurty tone)- But not hotter than you of course!
K (getting mad)- What the hell do you mean by that??
A- Look at yourself right now! Even with those simply clothes.. You look amazing!

Kripa is getting nervous.

A- And that night when you were at the bar (whistles)... Way hotter than these girls!
K (shocked)- How do you know that I was at the bar??
A- I saw you!

Kripa is speechless. Angad circles around Kripa. Kripa is like a statue.

A- You are the hottest girl I have ever seen and I promise to you Kripa.. that you WILL get to own this dream house and I'll get to own you!! (smirks)
K (moves away from him)- You think I will marry a flirt and casavona like you?? God knows how many girls you slept with!!
A- Oh really??
K- Shut up!! Show me my room!!
A (naughty)- Why don't you just stay with me and spend the night!
K- Sick man! I'm leaving!

Kripa walks was about to walk out. Angad grabs her hand and pulls her back.

A- Oh man!! That was fun!! You should have seen your face!! (laughs)

Kripa is like what the hell!!

A- I was just joking with you!! I needed a good laugh!! (laughs) and thanks to you I got one!! Me and marriage (laughs)...
K- It wasn't that funny!! (like a little kid)
A- I'm sorry.. I just brought you here so you can change into some other clothes...

Angad goes to the wardrobe and takes out a shirt and shorts. He gives them to Kripa.

A- Here were these untill tomorrow...
K- Thanks.. Bathroom??

Angad points to the bathroom. Kripa comes back and the shirt comes up to her knees and the shorts hang to her ankle. She looks like a little kid in their parents clothes. Angad smiles at her.

A (thinking)- She really is hot!!
K (thinking)- Oh God!! I look like a weirdo!!

K- My room??
A- Follow me!

Angad shows her her room. Kripa is about to close the door. She turns around and faces Angad.

K- Thanks Angad...
A- For what?
K- Not taking advantage of me...
A- No problem!
K- Good night!
A- Good night!

Kripa shuts the door and Angad leaves. They both go to sleep thinking about each other.

HoPe YoU lIkE iT!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
awww that was a cute and funny part lol continues ssooon lol 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: kyph05

awww that was a cute and funny part lol continues ssooon lol 😃 😃 😃

thanks didi!!😳 im glad that you liked it!!😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#37

thanks!😃 you're a great person!! 😳 you always encourage me to write more..😃 even though i get a feeling others don't like this fan-fic much!😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
hahah awesome part mauli!! i loved it continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
awww that was a funny part 😆 continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Pooja922

hahah awesome part mauli!! i loved it continue soon 😉

thanks pooja didi!! 😃

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