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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: girlie18
awww that was a funny part 😆 continue soon

yeah i was laughing when writing it!😆 i'll continue tomorrow!😃 Maybe..😕

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

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Posted: 19 years ago

#42

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏

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Pooja

@Pooja922

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Posted: 19 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

thanks pooja didi!! 😃

anytime mauli!😛😛

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Pooja922

anytime mauli!😛😛

awwwwww....thanks didi!!!!!!!😃

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Reality Hurts

@ruby89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#45

I just read all 4 parts. awww that was soooo GOOD! continue soon.
one piece of advice - mauli dont call ur own fanfic bad warna yeh pooja hai naa.. total Hulk 😆 will give u a lecture.. i got one few days back 😆 ..acha wese CONTINUE SOON!! cant wait to read what will happen in morning... naughty naughty angad but hez still a cutie 😳
-Ruby

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Krishana Tulsi

@Krishana Tulsi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#46

omg this sound great plz continue!!

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: ruby89
I just read all 4 parts. awww that was soooo GOOD! continue soon.
one piece of advice - mauli dont call ur own fanfic bad warna yeh pooja hai naa.. total Hulk 😆 will give u a lecture.. i got one few days back 😆 ..acha wese CONTINUE SOON!! cant wait to read what will happen in morning... naughty naughty angad but hez still a cutie 😳
-Ruby

thanks for the advise ruby didi!! and yeah angad is naughty but still cute!! and thanks for the comment!! it means a lot to me that you like my fan-fic!😃

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Krishana Tulsi
omg this sound great plz continue!!

thanks tulsi!!😃

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#49

PaRt 5

(Dedicated to our Pooja didi! I'll miss you a lot!)

Angad is laying on his bed and thinking about Kripa.

A (thinking)- Man she is a hot babe!! I will have to make her my girlfriend!!

Then he goes to sleep.

Kripa is laying on her bed thinking about Angad.

K (thinking)- Man Angad is SOO naughty!! But still a cutie!! But one thing is for sure... he is a BIG flurt!! 😆

Kripa then goes to sleep.

ThE nExT mOrNiNg

Kripa wakes up and goes to Angad's room. Angad is laying on the bed with his stomach on the bed. The blanket is on the floor and he is mumbling in his sleep.

A- Love is nothing.. Go away..

Kripa feels hurt that Angad doesn't believe in love...

She goes to Angad and tries to wake him up. But he doesn't wake up. Kripa gets an idea. She blows in his ear. Angad rubs his ear. Kripa gets annnoyed. She gets a glass of cold water and smiles evilly.

K- This Mr. Angad Khanna is because you don't believe in love!!

She pours it on his head. Angad wakes up with a jerk and sees Kripa laughing uncomtroably.

A (mad)- You think it's funny do you??

Kripa nods her head. Angad pulls Kripa ontop of him. Kripa is scared.

K- Angad chodo!!
A- No.. your eyes are so beautiful and your smile makes me want to smile (laughs)
K- What is this nonsense Angad? It's not funny!!
A (brings her closer)- Well, I think this is funny!!!
K (trying to get free)- Angad let go of me!!
A- Fine!

Angad lets go of her. They both stand up.

A- So why did you come here so early??
K- Vo.. I need my clothes...
A (flurty)- But you look hot in these clothes!! (laughs a little)
K- Ha Ha very funny!!
A- You think so too??
K- Serious Angad! I have to leave!!
A- I won't stop you (naughty)- Unless you want me too!!
K- Stop it!! I need my clothes.. I need to take a bath...
A- Ok!
K- Can I have them?
A- Wait...

Angad goes and gets Kripa's clothes from the drying machine. He gives them to her.

A (smiles)- Here...
K (smiles back)- Thanks!

Kripa is about to leave when she remembers something.

K- Um.. towel??
A- Oh.. There white towels in every bathroom! Use that one..
K- Ok!

Kripa leaves. Angad takes a quick 3 min shower and goes downstairs. Kripa is still in the bathroom. The servent gets the food ready. Angad is watching tv for a while. Then the food is set. He goes up to call Kripa. The door is open to the bedroom. He goes in and sees Kripa wrapped in a towel. Her hair is dripping.

A (thinking)- Damn!! She looks hotter than yesterday!!

Angad walks towards her not being able to resist. Kripa sees him and screams. Angad puts his hand over her mouth. Kripa is scared.

A- It's ok.. I called you for breakfast...
K- Mummmummm...
A- What??

Kripa bites Angad's hand...

A- Ow!!
K- Sorry...
A- It's ok...
K- I'll be back...

Kripa goes in the bathroom and comes out in 5 min. Kripa tries to tie her necklace but can't. Angad sees this and goes to her. He takes it and ties it. Kripa feels shivers down her spine. Kripa turns around to face Angad.

K (smiles)- Thanks..
A- Ok.. Let's go eat!
K- Ok!

HoPe YoU lIkE iT!
LoVe AlWaYz,
MaUlI