KRIYANSH no1 can separate them - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: yogini64

Nice story . . . . .
plz pm me too 😊


thank u 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ackraalkriyansh

TA_rey😭😭 NAHIII aisa nhi ho sakta...

Plzzz Update soon and bring K.R back...


yaa ill try to update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Awsome start..!
Loved it !
Update soon d next part !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Heya people updating after a long time I know I told ill update after 3 but was busy so sorry
hope u r liking my story
thatz for all your precious comment likes and time to read it plzz continue to do it
sorry for this spelling and all mistake I m just a starter so plzz adjust
so here goes the part 2

for pm's add-9869272025


PART 2
every 1 was hell worried for rey no1 knew where rey was finally they decided to go to the police and and tell them to find rey police started their work and started to find rey whole night passed but their was no clue of him finally at morning at 11 they got a call and police informed them that rey is in the city hospital and he met an accident whole gang soon reached and they saw the police man who was working on their case the police was going to tell the story but before whole gang rushed in rey's room but found that there was no1 in the room ll got tensed and went out to ask the police about him the police told him that he is in the room 205.The police told the gang to listen to whole story what happened and then go to meet him the police was telling the story to the gang while on the other side in room 205 a girl was laying unconscious on the bed mostly covered with bandages and a guy was holding girl's and talking to her (hope u all hav guessed it its none other then then rey and kriya)
after listning to the whole story by the police gang went to see both of them in kriya's room but they saw some1 was peeping from the glass of her room no 1 took time to guess who was it in 5 sec they heared a tight salp on some1's face and a body on the floor (idk u understood all understood who was peeping so let me tell its chevam oppz sorry shivam ) yes guy on the floor was none other shivam and the slap was by our majnu(swayam)
saywam-teri himat kaisa hui mera freidns ko choot pauchane ni
swayam caught shivam by hi collar and was beating him very badly and police came to save shivam otherwise swayam would hav killed shivam today surely whole time shivam wall horrified to hell and his face was starring the ground(hehehe bicahre aur kya kar bhi sakate hai aasia kaam karage to aaisa hi faal milage )
after police took shivam to jail every1 went inside the room and saw to love birds besides
k guyzzz u all must be thinking hua kya hai so let me tell u what is shivam's crime
rey was going to take taani for a date(agar pata ni kya date ki baat to 1st part padh lo)he was drving when he saw a fowers shop so he stopped the the car to collet flower's for her so called gf(gf huh kahayaki gf )he was retuning to his car after buying flowers when he saw a girl was crossing and a car which was with a high speed was going to hit here ho he ran and pushed her and he came in from of the car the girl(that is kriya)got side but by bad luck another car came and hit her she felt on the road and was bleeding badly while rey was infront of the car and git hit by the car and he fell down and his head badly hit the road and it started bleeding soon people took them to hospital and the police found that shivam the car driver was highly drunk so he got arrested and the car which hit kriya had no fault so the the left that car's driver (so pata chala ye kaisa hua and ye dono hospital kaisa pauche)
after the gang entered the the room they saw rey talking to kriya with whole heartly they went to rey(note-till now no1 knoew that the girl whom rey tried to save is kriya)
seeing that the girl is kriya every1 is shocked + happy
shocked that how come kriya here and happy that finally they found her every started to cry and all natak and all after some time they took rey to his room and told him to rest all girls were with kriya and the guys with rey in their room

okkk guyzz that its for today I hav to update for my rest 2 works also hope u all liked
it plzz do comment and hit like
love u all

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update
Thanks for the pm

That Shivam 😡


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Himaniahir

Awesome update

Thanks for the pm

That Shivam 😡





aww thanks alot for the comment it matter alot 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9869272025




aww thanks alot for the comment it matter alot 😊

Ur welcome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Us taani ko date pe le ke ja raha tha rey... Tabhi to accident ho gya 😆
ye accident bhi bahot shubh hai . . . . . . . I'll thank shivam . . . Gud job 🤗
rey kriya ke room me usse baatein karing 😊
is she conscious? 🤔
achha gift mil gya us taani ko 😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: alisha.a.s

awesome...

thnx for pm...



thankx alot 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: yogini64

Us taani ko date pe le ke ja raha tha rey... Tabhi to accident ho gya 😆
ye accident bhi bahot shubh hai . . . . . . . I'll thank shivam . . . Gud job 🤗
rey kriya ke room me usse baatein karing 😊
is she conscious? 🤔
achha gift mil gya us taani ko 😈




ohhh reqallt yaar i loved your comment 😃
Us taani ko date pe le ke ja raha tha rey... Tabhi to accident ho gya 😆
omg this1 was awesome😃
no she is not concious
lets se what happens ahead hope u liked this part

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