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Niti Mehta

@Miss_wannabe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox
starting read karke toh laga...its a taani rey ff

😆nai yaar it not a taarey ss ill never write a taarey SS being a kriyansh FAN its not possilbe but u liked it or not?????😕

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Niti Mehta

@Miss_wannabe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Born2Dance
its really gud start...

i liked d end but i just HATE d starting...!!!!

do update soon...

thnakx😊

sorry to disappoint u 😔

pakka next tiem aaisa ni hoga

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

Stunner

+ 17

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: 9869272025

😆nai yaar it not a taarey ss ill never write a taarey SS being a kriyansh FAN its not possilbe but u liked it or not?????😕

I liked it but only the ending...plz dont use smileys for taani...

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

this part ws just awesome

dnt wrry dear if u revealed the story.thr still z much suspense left tat hw did kriya reached hospital?hw rey found her?did she get hit??

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Niti Mehta

@Miss_wannabe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

I liked it but only the ending...plz dont use smileys for taani...

😔sorry to make u disappoint next time will not use smileys for her

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

Stunner

+ 17

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: 9869272025

😔sorry to make u disappoint next time will not use smileys for her

dont be sad yaar

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Niti Mehta

@Miss_wannabe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: tinatartari
this part ws just awesome
dnt wrry dear if u revealed the story.thr still z much suspense left tat hw did kriya reached hospital?hw rey found her?did she get hit??

thanks

😊thanks alot to support me u know i hav just started writing so dont know how to create proper suspence😔 but yaa there are little suspence left pura nai khula infact suspence bilkul ni khula 😛 guessing is not bad 😆 no1 knows what is goona happen so u guyzz keep guessing 😃 n really i m very happy to get your support 😳