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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guyzz i just wanted to tell that i m back with the update
so here goes the update

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part 3

rey still loved kriya so rey requested his freinds to shift him in her room so he can see her 24/7 finally they made arrangment for it and rey was shifted to her room (as her room had 2 bed's and 1 bed was empty) when he was shifted she was shocked to see him she thought that she will never hav to face him again faith had decide their meet
kriya ignored him and talked to girls as if he was not in the room rey felt very bad at seeing this but he was angry on kriya after what she did to him but his heart was not allowing him to hate her he tried to talk to her but all in vain finally it was night time every1 left expect swayam as kisi na kisi ko to rata ko rehana padaga na agar kuch zarurat padi to isliya but he was in other room where a prson from the paitent family's was allowed to stay
(idk agar aaisa hota hai yaa ni but i hav seen it in a hospital so...)
it was around 2 in the night when rey woke up but to his bad the was a curtain between both of the bed so he could not see her (poor him
) he wanted to see her face so he stood up from his bed and went to her bed and sat on the chair whihc was on the side of the bed and carcesed her hair she opened her eyes and saw rey and was shocked seeing him and that to he was carcesing her hair she was mumbling with the words ap...aapp yah...yaha kya ka...kar rahe ho...
(k guyz let me tell u doc had given kriya injection of anesthesia as she had many wounds so to give her rest and she dont fell pain doc had given to her so she was not full concisus)
rey-said nothign was just starring at her and was remebering how he saw her and saved her but was not sucessful but was happy that due to this he saw her but at the same time feeling bad to see her in this state
kriya-re...rey wo...wo mai
rey-susshhh (and he put his fingers on her lips) tumahe kuch bolne ki zarurat ni aabhi just go to sleep and take rest
kriya understood that he still loves her but was shocked that after what she said to him on pre-valentines day night he still loves her
(guyzz tum lo samaj lo that she cant speak propally as she is weak baar baar ni bol sakati mai)
kriya-naii...re...rey app...ko me...meri baat s...sun ni pad..padagi its imp
rey-k ill listen to u but 1st u get well i m not going anywhere k
kriya-nai (she starting sobbing)
rey-hery sushhh y r u crying what happened it it paining????
kriya-i...i...m soo..soorry rey
rey-????
kriya-wo...wo...maina pre-valentines...night pe...(she was cut)
rey-kriya thatz was past just forget it i dotn wanna know y u did this i just know that u love me bus
kriya started crying hard she was just touched by this she had no words for what rey said to her she was very happy that rey understands her
(before fainting kriya shouted rey i love u and that was the last thing which she spoke before fainting but rey was not yet fainted he listened to the words and saw people gagtherd both the bodies and were taking them to hospital after that he fainted
i know i didnt tell this before but mujha ye disclose ni karna tha pelahe so..)
kriya-i...i...love u...rey
rey-i love u 2 batcutter abb now stop crying my batcutter dosent look good she look good in the JHASI KI RAANI wala role (he just steched the thing
JHASI KI RAANI to tease her)
kriya gave a heartly laugh on it
their start llhh session
after some time they broke llhh session and rey kissed on kriya's forehead and told her to sleep kriya closed her eyes and rey was carcessin her hair till she went asleep before going to bed he again kissed her forehead and tolf love u batuctter on which smiled apperaed on kriya's lips

k guyzzz thatz it for today hope u like it do comment and hit like button plzzz

till then byee tc


Edited by 9869272025 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
ooosssoommm..!!!! Lovd it...!!! Thanxxx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Awww . . . Loved this part 🤗
its amazing . . . . . U did a gr8 job by keeping them in 1 room 😉
although rey ko bahot bura laga hoga pura din jab kriya ne usse ignore kiya 😭
but raat ko akela hi time milna tha na 😉
she confessed before fainting . . . . . There he realized that she always loved him ❤️
don't cry kriya . . . . He's all urs 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
awesome and amazing love it... update res of the chapter soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG... . . . . . . . .
U r writting 1 more ss and mujhe abb pata chal raha h,
mummy not fair. . .*. . .sobs. . .*
vaise super awsome updates yaar. . . . . .
All the 3 chaps r superb. . . . . . . . .
Yuppiee mere kriyaansh r 2gethr. . . . . .
Wowww. . . . . .
Aur uss shivam ki toh mai. . . . .idiot kahika. . .
And tat taani urrggghh. . . . . . . . . .
Achaa hai mere kriyaansh they both r 2gethr now. . . . .
Buss kriya jaldi thk ho jaaye,and evrythng gets normal again. . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . . . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

it sweet of rey...

awesome.update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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rey is soo sweet..

update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Note:k guyzz let me tell u this not an update i just want u to u tell all that i m stopping all my 3 writing as i dont get more then 15 likes n max to max 14-15 comeents i know i m just a starter but yaar this is not done i send 56 pm's n only this much amount of likes n comments upar se i hav hell lots of my coll work n all then also i give updates even though they r samll and i know after long long interval but yaar this is not done tum logo ko ek starte ko motivate karna chaiya not demotivate i m not happy ay all so i m stopping my all 3 writing
the gives given below


KRIYANSH no1 can separate them-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3218504

EvErY OnE gEtS tRuE lOvE-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3206375

Facbook friends changes into love-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3240489

byee peepss now u will only see me commenting on your writings

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9869272025

hey people this is an KIYANSH SS infact my 1st SS n 2nd story hope u all like it I hav just started writing my stories hope u all will like it n plzz do tell your friends about it as I m a newbie n cant sent links in PM 😔



INTRODUCTION

after kriya left St.Louis everything changed shivam came in st.louis aS a student taani proposed rey and rey also excepted it as he started falling for her but deep inside he still feels for 1 and only 1 girl that is nonother than our kriya SWARON a couple now every1 knows about it n they r having no prob in their relationship not as D3's recent track n rest all Is same shivam making plan to break the unity of louins but never successful in his plans RDX n prince r still there no VP and no AVP



PART 1

After 1 year
tring tring'. Ting tirng'..
a muscular hand picked up the call
boy-hmm
girl-gud morning jaanu kaisa ho??
boy-hmm
girl 'rey kab see hmm laga kar rakaha hai mai aap see bat kar rahi hun and app ko baat hi nai kari huh if u don't want to talk than I m cutting the call
(yes the guy was rey ❤️)
rey-sorry mai wo neend mai tha
hello..u der
taani sorry na mai need mai tha
(yes she was none other then TAANI 😛)
taani-thik hai thik hai ab ek kaam karo app jaldi se coll aao mai app ka wait kar rhai hun and haan maina aap ke liya coll mai ek surprise rakahi hai (saying with a wide smile on her face)
rey-thik hai ill be ther in an hour
and then he ended the call
rey woke up got ready and went to coll but he saw there was no1 in coll he searched for taani n whole gang in the coll but found no1 finally he went to check tha last place left that was cantine n when he reached there he saw whole cantinee decorated and saw happy anniversary TAAREY(taani+rey they used to call taani reyy as taarey)
rey entered the cantinee n suddenly some1 put hands on rey's eyes n said surprise rey catched the hands and say happy anniversary taani 😊
then rey turned taani towards him so she can face him and when they saw each other they had LLHH session which was broken by the bell and student started coming
after that they had regural classes and had planned to 1st attend all the lectures and then go on a date at 8 pm rey told her that he will pick her at sharp 8 pm
at 8.30
taani-heloo Sharon aap ko pata rey kahan hai??
Sharon-nai kyun kya hua everything alright??
taani-nai bus rey ne kahan tha ke wo mugha 8 baje ko pick karne ayange as we were going to go on a date but he didn't came till now
Sharon-tansion mat lo taani wo aa jayage must be in some work
taani-hmm think hai ohk byeee (in a sad face)
Sharon-byee and tension mat lo wo aa jayaga
call eneded
no1 knows where is rey wo na to kisi ke ghar pe hai na to taani ke saath hai to rey hai kahan????

precap-kriya on hospital bed n some1 seeing her from the window of the door

may questions where rey is n kriya hospital mai kaisa who was watching her????
I hope ki app ko pata chal gaya ho as maina most of the things reveal kar di
and very very sorry for language I know bauhat saari mistakes but time ke saath wo bhi sudhar gayagi


part 2 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3218504&TPN=4

part3 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3218504&TPN=7

huh nyc chp...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9869272025

Heya people updating after a long time I know I told ill update after 3 but was busy so sorry
hope u r liking my story
thatz for all your precious comment likes and time to read it plzz continue to do it
sorry for this spelling and all mistake I m just a starter so plzz adjust
so here goes the part 2

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PART 2
every 1 was hell worried for rey no1 knew where rey was finally they decided to go to the police and and tell them to find rey police started their work and started to find rey whole night passed but their was no clue of him finally at morning at 11 they got a call and police informed them that rey is in the city hospital and he met an accident whole gang soon reached and they saw the police man who was working on their case the police was going to tell the story but before whole gang rushed in rey's room but found that there was no1 in the room ll got tensed and went out to ask the police about him the police told him that he is in the room 205.The police told the gang to listen to whole story what happened and then go to meet him the police was telling the story to the gang while on the other side in room 205 a girl was laying unconscious on the bed mostly covered with bandages and a guy was holding girl's and talking to her (hope u all hav guessed it its none other then then rey and kriya)
after listning to the whole story by the police gang went to see both of them in kriya's room but they saw some1 was peeping from the glass of her room no 1 took time to guess who was it in 5 sec they heared a tight salp on some1's face and a body on the floor (idk u understood all understood who was peeping so let me tell its chevam oppz sorry shivam ) yes guy on the floor was none other shivam and the slap was by our majnu(swayam)
saywam-teri himat kaisa hui mera freidns ko choot pauchane ni
swayam caught shivam by hi collar and was beating him very badly and police came to save shivam otherwise swayam would hav killed shivam today surely whole time shivam wall horrified to hell and his face was starring the ground(hehehe bicahre aur kya kar bhi sakate hai aasia kaam karage to aaisa hi faal milage )
after police took shivam to jail every1 went inside the room and saw to love birds besides
k guyzzz u all must be thinking hua kya hai so let me tell u what is shivam's crime
rey was going to take taani for a date(agar pata ni kya date ki baat to 1st part padh lo)he was drving when he saw a fowers shop so he stopped the the car to collet flower's for her so called gf(gf huh kahayaki gf )he was retuning to his car after buying flowers when he saw a girl was crossing and a car which was with a high speed was going to hit here ho he ran and pushed her and he came in from of the car the girl(that is kriya)got side but by bad luck another car came and hit her she felt on the road and was bleeding badly while rey was infront of the car and git hit by the car and he fell down and his head badly hit the road and it started bleeding soon people took them to hospital and the police found that shivam the car driver was highly drunk so he got arrested and the car which hit kriya had no fault so the the left that car's driver (so pata chala ye kaisa hua and ye dono hospital kaisa pauche)
after the gang entered the the room they saw rey talking to kriya with whole heartly they went to rey(note-till now no1 knoew that the girl whom rey tried to save is kriya)
seeing that the girl is kriya every1 is shocked + happy
shocked that how come kriya here and happy that finally they found her every started to cry and all natak and all after some time they took rey to his room and told him to rest all girls were with kriya and the guys with rey in their room

okkk guyzz that its for today I hav to update for my rest 2 works also hope u all liked
it plzz do comment and hit like
love u all

shivam😡😡😡

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